Re Read please
For those that have read up to this point by July 8, 2020. If you have read up to this point after that date you are good to go. Keep reading and enjoy the story.
I rewrote chapters 15 and 16 please re-read them and let me know what you think of them now compared to before.
In my defense, I did say I wasn't sure I was happy with how they were turning out so now I am happy and would love your opinion.