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What A Woman Wants

By Trenton Riopel All Rights Reserved ©

Romance

Chapter 1

A/N This is my first ever story please go easy on me. I have gone back over the story for spelling and grammar errors as was pointed out in a review to me. thank you AnnDee for the kick in the pants and for being my first reviewer

Hermione Granger was sitting at a table in the common room. Trying to come up with a plan for something that just is not plan-able. You see for the past six and a half years she has been best friends with one Harry Potter. Just last week she watched him take out the most feared and most vile wizard known to the world.. Yes I said wizard.. For you see. Hermione is a Witch and they both attend Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry. She wants Harry to be the one.. The man she will love and marry and all other things that a 17-year-old Witch wants in a man. For you see she has loved Harry for many years now.. Ever since her first year when Hermione was saved from a mountain troll in the girls loo her first year by Harry. Being the bookworm that she is and having had a failed relationship with her other best friend Ron Wesley she is unsure of her self. Tired of trying to think up a plan she stands up walks over to Harry who is lounging on the couch by the fire playing chess with Ron and loosing badly. She grabs him hauls him on his feet and says well-looking him in the eyes "follow me Harry." Turning to Ron she says "I'm going to borrow him for a few minutes we will be back I'm sorry but this is private Ron" and then drags the unsuspecting Harry out of the common room and down the hall towards the Room of Requirement.

Back in the common room Ron smiles and says out loud "It's about Bloody time" then he packs up his chessboard and goes to his dorm to take a kip.

In the room a few minutes later Harry looks at Hermione with a strange look in his eyes wondering what she wants with him that requires the privacy of the room of requirements "Umm Hermione whats all this about?" turning around after being silent for a few minutes whispering to her self "Gryffindor charge in" she turns smiles and says " This Harry" and grabs his robes pulls him to her and kisses him deeply.

Harry was shocked for a minute but the kiss was soon returned with full vigor.. for Harry never suspected Hermione liked him but he had loved her since their adventure on Buckbeak. after a few minutes of kissing and the need for air harry pulls back looking her in the eyes and smiles "Well that was, Unexpected but a nice change for you.. What brought this on?'

The suddenly shy girl smiled and spoke just above a whisper "A need to see if I can catch the one snitch that will make me complete" Harry still herd the girl and pulled her closer again and spoke quietly in to the girls ear "You caught this snitch 3rd year you just did not know you had it" The smile on the girls lips would power a city for a month. She then launched herself at Harry and they continued where they left off a few minutes ago..

Kissing progressed as it normally does for Hormonal teenagers even if they were adults in the Wizarding world and no one in the castle saw them till the next morning.

A Few Years Later

A very happy couple where standing on the platform of 9 3/4 watching their youngest get on the train for her first year at Hogwarts. a small boy who looked too young to be there shyly waved to the girl as he entered her compartment asking if he can share the seat..

The mother of the girl looked to her mate and said "It looks like history may repeat its self with those two" the man looked up quickly at his little girl and saw her conversing with the small boy at about a mile a minute. The look of fear in his eyes as he turned to his wife of many years "don't pull a Luna on me Honey that's not funny" Hermione just smiled and said " We will just see"

it turned out to be a very prophetic statement as that small boy walked his princess down the aisle after they got married 8 years later..

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