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ROOMATE

By roseline140 All Rights Reserved ©

Romance

Chapter 1: every thing goes wrong

It was a normal day for me. I was listening to music when I hear a knock on the door. I got up from my bed and opened the door to see Zarina with a happy face. " Hey Zarina what's up", I said. " Nothing much just got some good news for you", Zarina said. " What's the good news Zarina",I said. I had wished I had never said anything. "Remember the dude from six grade that you didn't like",Zarina said. " Yes Jack, The jerk that break your heart and made everyone from school hate you", I said. " Yea well while I was at the store when I saw him and we started talking and he said sorry about everything and told me he was look for a place to live so I told him to live with us",Zarina said with a smile. I was so shocked that I couldn't move or talk. " Roseline are you ok you like pale. When I finally got back to normal I told her where was he going to be staying. " Down stairs with you Roseline duh oh and please don't be mean to him, his changed, his a good person now",Zarina said."ARE YOU CRAZY WHY ARE YOU LETTING THAT JERK THAT BREAK YOUR HEART AND DIDN'T CARE ABOUT HURTING YOUR HURT STAY IN YOUR HOUSE AND WORST OF ALL I HAVE TO SEE IS UGLY FACE EVERYDAY WHAT WERE YOU THINKING,OPEN YOUR EYES. I ran to my car before she could say nothing else. I started the car and drove to my friend Madison's house. While driving there I saw a puppy in the ride. I parked my car and walked up to the puppy and picked it up and put it in the car and drove to Madison's house. I drove it her driveway to park there and after parking my car turned the car off and got the puppy out the car and walked to her door and knocked on her door.When she opened the door I told her the crazy thing Zarina was doing. Madison got really mad. "Please tell me this is a joke she can't let that jerk live in her house, has she forgotten what he do to her",Madison said. " No it's not a joke, I wish it was just a joke or a nightmare but it's not it's real and she think's he has changed and that his a nice guy now because he said sorry and was nice to her ", I said. We talked a little more about what Zarina was doing and then I calmed her down because she was really mad and don't her to do something crazy so after I calmed her down I tell her that I need to go to the pet store to get some things for the puppy and asked her to come with me. While driving we named the puppy Valentenia. When we got to Madison's house I checked the time.when I checked it it was 5:oo pm so I had left to go to my/Zarina/James house. James is Zarina boyfriend, They been dating since high school. I said goodbye to Madison and drove back to the house. I parked my car and walked in. when I was inside I saw Zarina and James talking to Jack and helping him put his things in his new room. I walked quietly to my room to get some clothes and a towel and walked to the bathroom to take a shower. When I was done I did my homework and give Valentenia some food and water and put her to bed . After I put Valentenia to sleep I went to sleep. I can't believe that jerk ruined my life.

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