Prologue
We are in the car headed to St. Louis. My dads driving. Moms in the passenger seat rambling about how excited she is.
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Sebastian Antonio Grey was the CEO of his parents company. Born again billionaire. Playboy at heart. Sarah Anne Knight was an all around country girl. Thrown to another state after a terrible tragedy. Sebastian was at his favorite club. It’s was well after dinner time. He didn’t care he was in no mood to eat. After the day he had he just wanted to forget it. As he headed to the bar to order a drink something caught his eye. When she turned around to search the crowd he caught his breathe. “What is such a beautiful woman doing in a club like this ?” He thought.
Maureen: Great story. A little rushed. I did enjoy how Ryker dropped the mate bomb.Your off to a great start the story is a little rushed and could have more to it but it is nice as a novella.An editor will catch what few mistakes you made, don't sweat it. I'm a writer also and I miss stuff too sometime...