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Psychotic Love

By mariebluecat All Rights Reserved ©

Romance

Act I

When they first met it was an unusual encounter for the both of them.The second time they met it was to survive a sadistic  game created  for masochists. They were similar but she was drastically different in her mental state. It interested him.

Her personality was the opposite of her looks, such a happy girl with a smile that never fades. Her light red brown curls and a slightly freckled  face of an innocent looking girl with a body of a child.

She wore clothes that a child might wear, a long sleeved green button-up shirt that hung loosely from her body. A black skirt that went mid-thigh length with long black socks that covered her legs, leaving only her skin from her hands and head exposed.

On the other hand her personality. At first she seemed like the shy quiet  type that wouldn't do anything bad. Then when they participated in the game she became ruthless, killing people who stood in their way from winning. The various ways she killed them frightened him, but as it slowly progressed he too had to kill. Such a smart little girl had been tainted by this world.

He was smarter than her, but she still passed him in some ways. He had high expectations put on him by everyone. He could never get below an 'A' or could be with other kids his age, parents fearing that he would become more dumb than he already was. He wasn't very social and was cold to everyone who tried to get close to him. Despite this he intentionally made a friend named Byakuya.

He was happy that he became friends with Byakuya since he didn't  make fun of his eyes or what he looked liked. He had short blond hair  that curved into his head, and his eyes were unnatural. They were black while it was white in the middle were his irises should be. He wore normal blue jeans with a plain black shirt.

Their names were Samantha and Yin. The two were practically polar opposites from the other, but as they say opposites attract and that’s what happened.

A twisted, dark tale is about to unfold before your eyes. Are you sure you want to keep reading? Is morbid curiosity take control of you just to read a simple story? If so, welcome and may you have a good time.
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