Discovering the Pack: Primordial Claim

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At seventeen, Harou Brier-Hawthorne has never left Red Hawthorne territory; there was no reason for him to do so. Pack troubles and monstrous creatures on The Ridge kept this Alpha and future leader bustling. Moreover, harboring a bizarre genetic mutation, a Brier's short temper, elite schooling, and training, Harou is considered too dangerous and 'unique' to send beyond Hawthorne land. However, when numerous squads from differing packs go missing within the Inner Circle, another must investigate and eliminate the nuisance. Reluctant to lose more members, the lesser families cowered. No one volunteered. That is, until Merrick Brier. Amidst the six wolves ordered forth is Harou; thus, the Hawthorne's most potent unit rallies, heeding their Alpha's summoning. Outside familiar waters, will the seemingly unsociable and aggressive Alpha's Alpha sink or swim? Furthermore, what's this feeling of angst Harou gets when Chance Lexington, the charismatic Alpha, and heir to the Black Camellia pack, is nearby?

Romance / Fantasy
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Faytale is a cruel and unforgiving world. Discovering the Pack: Primordial Claim is one tale that falls within the Feytale world.


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