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The Never Forgotten Love

By Pink_Harmony All Rights Reserved ©

Other / Romance

The start ~

My name is Alice. I am 15 years old. The seaside was always my favourite place. Holidays there where magical. The ever first time I went there was when I was 5, I loved it. I remember that day till now and it have been 10 years. Time passes by so fast you don't even realize. I wish that I could go back to that day and see him one more time...

By him I mean my very best friend David. We met at the seaside 10 years ago. We both loved the sapphire blue water and the sand under our feet. From that day we stayed in contact. We would visit each other nearly everyday. We went everywhere together and did everything together. Well not everything but a big chunk of things were us. Together. We started growing up and we would call each other everyday. We still met up but no as much. He was always there for me and I was always there for him.

So we were growing up together... until when we hit that teen age 12. He was different he changed. He used to tell me how people bullied him because he ,well he was adopted. I sometimes could not believe what he told me. The next year he moved schools and it all changed he made a lot of friends. I was happy for him. But then that day came, he was moving to a different country. Australia. I was angry at his parents. I didn't want him to leave. But he did he was so unhappy. The next year something really bad happened he was 'kidnapped' I. Was. Devastated. Then few days later his mother vanished too. I had many suspicions.

He is gone for a year now. I miss him so much.I want him back. I should have stoped them. I didnt want him to leave, i loved him, more than just as a friend...


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