Time Flies

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She thought no one would love a broken girl, he thought there were more pieces to love. ~Daniel Jonathan Parker A Broken Girl with a Dark past, A Hotshot Millionaire. What happens when they both cross paths with each other? Will David find his way to Ava's heart? Will Ava let him in? Keep reading to Find out...

Romance / Drama
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Author Note

Hello everyone😄

Thank you for clicking on my story.

This is my first story. There can be a lot of flaws. I mean, no one is perfect. Everyone does mistakes.

Anyways, feel free to correct them by commenting on the inline comments. This is my first book so I am new to this and I am trying to improve. Also, English isn't my first language so excuse me if you find errors😅

I had written this story when I was 16 and my friend @drashti_1708 encouraged me to put it up online and I finally decided to put it up somewhere so here I am.

I may not be skilled and professional like others but I believe my ideas are worth a read.

So please give it a read. You won't be disappointed unless you are not a fan of romance.❤

I like writing stories and I wanted everyone to see my work.

You may notice while reading that my writing style is different than the others.

Some say it's like a movie script but not a movie script or it has multiple POV's at once.

I want to say it's between a Movie Script and a Novel.

I tried something new☺

I hope you like it.

Votes and comments are appreciated. Again, Don't hesitate to point out my mistakes.

Every character and scene is my imagination. Copying or interpretation of the same is not appreciated. Please refrain from doing so.

The similarity of my story to some another story is purely coincidental.

You can check out my other story

'Maybe Perfect'

It's completed too.

I would advise you to complete reading this book before reading the other.

The character aesthetic is in the next chapter.

The story starts in chapter 1, part 4

Again, Vote and comment.

It encourages me to write more. Feel free to pm me your thoughts about the story.

I will try to reply to all the comments and messages.

...Thank you...

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Jazzy67: Great story. Can’t wait to read more from this author..Highly recommend..Great love story..❤️

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Cyndi Richardson: I loved this storyvery Intense Pleasewrite another story

Racquel E Elliott: I'm liking the story but don't you think there are too many twists going on.I understand you have a plan but I'm like give them a break already

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