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Chapter 27 Abu Dhabi, Sex and Rollercoasters

We finally arrive at the hotel. Elena is in the shower and I am putting on my bikini. I can’t wait to dive into the pool. It’s been a while since I felt the sun on my skin. The pool is on the rooftop so we have to take the elevator up. I can’t wait to see it.

“Wow babe, let’s just stay in this room; rooftop swimming pools are overrated,” Elena responds when she sees me in my bikini.

She walks towards me and pulls me close to her. She kisses me softly on my lips. I feel that she wants more but if I give in now, we will never be getting out of this room.

“Okay stop it, as much I’d love to spend the whole day with you in this room, I think we should go and have a swim first. Because once we go there, I won’t stop!” I respond while breathing heavy and pushing her away.

“I like the sound of not stopping!” she responds while looking at me like I’m a dessert.

“Later babe!” I respond and walk towards the door while I put on my cover.

“You are no fun; I still have to change!” she shouts after me.

“Meet me at the swimming pool!” I shout back before leaving the room. If I would have waited for her, I would have never escaped that room.

I take the elevator to the rooftop. I enter the rooftop and there are three swimming pools. In one of them there’s a bar in the middle of it. You can see the beautiful skyline of Dubai and I love it. The speakers are playing a song from Pitbull.

Now baby give a booty naked, take off all your clothes,
and light the roof on fire
Tell her baby baby baby baby
I’m in fire
I tell her baby baby baby
I’m a fireball


I saw, I came, I conquered
Or should I say, I saw I conquered, I came
I get a very happy vibe and put my bathrobe on one of the sunbeds. It’s not that crowded, maybe because it’s not peak season to come to Dubai. Thank God for that. On the opposite of the pool, two muscular guys are sitting on the beds sipping a drink and looking at me. I ignore them and jump into the pool.

I love to swim; it eases my mind. I did this a lot with Jay. He taught me how to perfect my freestyle. I love him for that. I should call AJ soon to see how he is doing and if he wants to stop by.

He started studying law just like his dad; Jay was supposed to be a lawyer by now. We have been hanging out with each other and I see him as my baby brother. But he isn’t so little anymore. Well, he is 16, and he has a crush on a girl in his class. I love his innocence and that he has still got it after all that he’s been through. He’s just as handsome as Jay so that girl isn’t going to be a problem for him.

I like to swim laps and that’s what I’m doing. I can see Elena approaching me; she’s wearing a black cut-out halter monokini which accentuates her long legs and you can see the outline of her breasts. The guys are looking at her with their mouths open drooling over her.

She winks at me and jumps into the pool, swimming towards me.

I don’t think it will be long before we get back to the hotel room.

“You trying to kill me by wearing that?” I respond.

Her naughty smile appears. “Well, that’s the look I was going for,” she responds.

“You definitely are wearing a killer look,” I say while crossing my legs in the pool.

“Thank you, Miss Gopal,” Elena responds.

“Miss Gopal? Since when are we talking to each other on a last name basis, Miss Mitchell?” I ask, laughing.

“Since you are the boss and I’m just along for the ride,” Elena responds while winking at me.

“I’m the boss, I sure like the sound of that!” I respond cocky.

“Well, if I am the boss let me start with bossing you around then. In about 30 minutes we need to leave for our hotel room, you are going to dress up for me and we will be going to a famous restaurant but before that, I have a surprise for you, and NO that’s not in the bedroom; we have to drive 50 minutes to get there! And If you behave nicely...maybe then will I reward you!” I say in a bossy voice.

“Okay, and if I misbehave?”

“Then I need to punish you!” I respond.

“Punish me? And what will my punishment be?”

“Try me and you will see,” I say while looking at her with a straight face and trying not to laugh.

I don’t think I’m very convincing.

By the look in Elena’s eyes, she’s definitely going to try something. I swim away before she can even respond making four more laps and getting out of the pool to lie down on the pool bed to get my tan on. Elena is already lying down and enjoying the sun.

“When was the last time you went on vacation?” I ask Elena.

“It took me a while to get on vacation actually. After my parents died, I had a fear of flying. They died in a plane crash. There was nothing left of them, just a few body parts. The funeral was just two coffins with their pictures on them. I never saw them after that but it felt like I would. Like they would appear for me someday telling me it’s all a joke. It’s hard to explain but if you never witnessed someone’s dead body it’s hard to say goodbye to them because your mind can’t comprehend it. But five years later I went on vacation with my colleagues to Spain and after that, I went to Portugal. My last vacation was Turkey actually with my ex.”

“I’m sorry; I didn’t even ask about the flying thing, stupid of me to assume,” I respond.

“No, it’s okay and I didn’t fear anything on the plane with you. In fact, when I’m with you there is no fear at all only happy thoughts!” Elena responds with a genuine smile on her face.

“Aww, thank you, I feel exactly the same! How many ex-boyfriends do you have? I’m assuming that you only had boyfriends?” I ask.

“That’s true. I have never been with a girl before; you’re my first,” she says, smiling.

I want to respond AND YOUR LAST but decide not to.

“I have three ex-boyfriends. The first one lasted three years but I was only 16 years old when we got together. The second one isn’t worth mentioning because it only lasted three months. After all, he cheated on me. And the last one lasted four years and we broke up because we weren’t good for each other. The sex was dreadful and he wanted different things out of the relationship than me. I think that’s it,” she explains.

I nod while looking at the time. “Shit, look at the time we have to go and get ready,” I say hastily while grabbing my towel and putting on my cover. “Let’s go,” I say, a bit too demanding.

“Yes, boss,” Elena replies while saluting me.

I smile. “Good girl,” I say and walk towards the elevator while Elena follows me. The elevator opens and there is no one in it. We step into the empty elevator and as soon as it closes, I press Elena against the wall while kissing her hard on her lips, my mouth exploring her soft lips. She opens up for me and our tongues are dancing like they have something to lose. Before we know it, the elevator opens and I stop kissing her immediately pretending nothing happened and walking away towards our room smiling without her noticing it. She stands there still shaken up about our kiss.

I walk towards our room and leave the door open. Elena walks in, closes the door, and locks it. I walk towards the shower and strip myself naked. We don’t have time for anything or else we are going to be late. I turn on the shower and Elena walks in beside me. She puts some shower gel on her hands and rubs herself with it. I see foam slowly sliding over her body; she looks at me seductively while doing this but I can’t give in or we will be late. I admire the way she rubs herself, provoking me to touch her. I’ve got to admit she is testing my self-restraint and it’s taking all of me not to give in. I shower quickly without taking my eyes off Elena. She is still standing there seducing me but is noticing that she isn’t going to win me over. I slap her on her ass and walk out quickly.

“Auch, what was that for?” she asks.

“For misbehaving,” I respond.

“Hmmm, I have to misbehave more often!” Elena responds with a naughty smile on her face.

I don’t know how much longer I can stand this!

I blow dry my hair fast. I should even blow dry my pussy but I don’t think that she can be saved anymore. She’s never getting dry today.

Did I just refer to my pussy as a she?

I put on a jumpsuit with long pants because you aren’t allowed to show much skin in Dubai. Well, I have seen many tourists that do but I like to respect the rules of the country. I’m just a visitor after all. And I’m already defying their rules because I’m here with a woman. Well, it’s not about the woman but the things I will be doing to that woman tonight.

Elena is dressed in a long skirt with a flower print.

“Ready?” I ask her.

“Yes, boss,” she responds again.

“You better watch out before I get used to you calling me that,” I respond with a smile on my face.

“I don’t mind,” she responds but I can see her overthinking it. “I don’t mind for now,” she corrects herself.

I just wink and don’t respond. We walk towards the taxi and get in.

“Where are you taking me?” she asks.

“Uhm, you don’t know the definition of a surprise?”

“Humour me,” she responds.

“Surprise means you need to shut the fuck up and wait for what I have in store for you,” I respond with a wide grin.

“Wow, never heard of that definition but thank you for that explanation,” Elena chuckles.

“Anytime,” I respond cockily.

I love the way we can talk to each other. Elena gets me and that we share the same humour is a bonus.


“We’re almost there. I want you to put this on, you trust me, right?”

“I do,” she responds.

There is so much I could say to the words “I do” but I decide to shut up for once. I give Elena a blindfold and she puts it on.

We walk towards the entrance and I pay for two tickets. We are in line and have to wait. We’re the next to get in so I take off Elena’s blindfold.

“Welcome to the fastest rollercoaster ride of the world,” I scream, happy, while everybody in line is looking at us weird but I don’t mind.

“Oh my God, seriously I wasn’t expecting this,” Elena squeals. “How exciting!”

“Thank God you love it because I was scared that you would chicken out!” I respond.

“I’m no chicken!” she yells out.

“Good because this rollercoaster goes 150 miles per hour,” I say in an informative way.

We have to put goggles on for the protection of our eyes. I’ve never sat in a rollercoaster that goes so fast that you had to put protection on for your eyes. We sit down in the rollercoaster. There’s a man checking if we are sitting safely.

“Any last words?” I ask Elena with a grin on my face.

“See you on the other side,” she responds.

Before we know it, we are launched at 150 miles per hour. Our faces are pushed by the wind; they can’t move because that’s how fast we are going. Normally when you get launched by a rollercoaster it slows down after the second turn but not this one. This rollercoaster is so fast that your stomach is tumbling the whole time.

I feel goosebumps and excitement all over my body and I love it. Elena is screaming next to me and I laugh at her. I heard her scream but not like this and I love to get to know her. I love that I’m here with Elena.

We get out the adrenaline still shooting through our bodies.

“Look it’s a picture of us with our faces frozen,” I respond.

“We look ridiculous!” Elena responds.

“Hey, speak for yourself, I like my face,” I joke.

“Aww baby, I like your face! I didn’t mean to offend you!”

“Too late, okay stop it! I’m buying that picture!” I respond.

After a number of other attractions that don’t even come close to the first one, we head towards the restaurant. It’s a fancy Indian restaurant.

“You tell me what I need to order because you know the cuisine better than I do,” Elena tells me.

I order a few dishes and we eat and talk about random stuff. Elena’s hobbies are shooting at the shooting range and shopping but that isn’t a surprise to me. She’s always wearing something new and I love that about her. I love a lot of things about her.

Did I just say love?

Good thing we are in Dubai so she can shop in my absence. There are plenty of malls to go around. It feels like we have known each other for a long time and are already in a long relationship.

“Check please,” I say to the waiter because I have other plans for tonight. Plans I would like to get to as soon as possible.

Before the waiter can even put the check on our table Elena snatches it out of his hands.

“Sorry about that, but I would like to pay with my credit card please,” she responds as if she just conquered something.

The waiter nods and Elena pays the bill and I let her. It feels good actually that she lets me know that she’s an independent woman. Everything about this woman turns me on.

The ride back to the hotel takes even longer. Well, it feels that way. We walk back to our room and when I open it every ounce of self-restraint is drained out of me. After closing and locking the door I push Elena against it. I look into her eyes and I know what I have in store for her tonight...

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