{{ contest.story_page_sticky_bar_text }} Be the first to recommend this story.
Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

Free copy left
You can read our best books
Evelin Schuldhaus would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

El collar

By Evelin Schuldhaus All Rights Reserved ©


Chapter 1

No te importó en lo más mínimo romper mi corazón. Incluso a veces pienso y me digo a mi misma, que ni siquiera te has dado cuenta de lo que me has hecho. No te culpo, porque ni siquiera sabes que existo. Me culpo a mi misma por haber creído que te importaría. ¿Me habrías por lo menos mirado si las circunstancias fueran otras?. Ya no puedo seguir si sé que no pasaré contigo el resto de mi vida. Tenía esperanzas, pero no fui más que una tonta por habérmelo imaginado. Tal vez nunca sepas que existo, pero a ti no te importa. Tu vida es más importante que yo. Tus días son magníficos, y con la vida que llevas dudo mucho que una persona como yo sea importante. ¡Como cambiaste con el paso del tiempo!. Ahora ni miras hacia atrás. Tal vez sea mejor, no digo que no me gustes como eres. Solo has cambiado, como yo también lo he hecho, pero cada día estoy más lejos de esa persona que solías ser. Esa sonrisa en tu rostro dice más que las palabras en cada canción que compones. Cada vez que las escucho, siento que me faltas. No preguntes si me he enamorado de tu sonrisa, o de tu forma de caminar. Nunca te diré cuando fue la primera vez que te presté atención. No creo que te interese. Pero si sabes como llorar con cada acorde de la guitarra, supongo que entenderás lo que siento. ¿Es que acaso no sabes que eres para mi?.

Pero ya no importa ¿No? Dadas las circunstancias esto jamás lo leerás. Estás demasiado ocupado para eso. He estado mirando esa última entrevista ¿Qué es ese nuevo rumor? Ya no te dejan vivir en paz, aunque creo que como artista jamás la has tenido. Y otra cosa... Esa barba no te queda bien, deberías cambiar tu look. Créeme , tus fans me lo agradecerán. Por otro lado, el azul te siente bien, deberías usarlo más seguido. Además creo saber de qué era esa sonrisa en tu última foto del Twitter. No te preocupes, solo estoy recordando por qué me enamoré de ti. No lloro de tristeza, aunque un poco puede ser. Llenaré mis libros con resaltador, con las metáforas de los poemas que leo antes de dormir. Tu voz resuena en mis oídos en ese nuevo éxito que has lanzado.Impaciente espero que contestes los mensajes que te he estado enviando. ¿Podré olvidarte? No me quería dar por vencida, quise luchar hasta el final, pero hay tantas diferencias que ya no puedo pensar en algo que nos una. Vives del otro lado del mundo, hablas otro idioma, vives una realidad completamente diferente a la mía. Si me vieras una vez, ¿Tendría alguna oportubidad?. Ya qué, no quiero ni pensarlo. Ya he tenido suficiente...

Write a Review Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Evelin Schuldhaus
Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

Alkira Joan: Great story, I found it hard to read especially the dialogue. You just need to fix up some spelling errors and the gramma .I enjoyed this book. was a little hard to get though.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,, , , , ,.,, , , , , , , ,., , ,.,,,,,

OpheliaJones: This story took a different kind of spin on the "normal girl lives with definitely not normal guy" plot. The plot points of Frey's father, Liam's family, and Frey's view of Liam's world were good to read. She did not fall in love with him in the first couple weeks. Their lives were not smooth in ...

Alex Rushmer: Chapter One: Not much is happening in this chapter, but I was absolutely fascinated by the depth of your character development. I love how you just sat there with the reader and explored Eddward. Usually, that sort of thing gets boring very fast, but this was actually really cool! He's so unique ...

263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...

JONANNA: As an avid reader it is not often I say that about a book. The plot is what was different and the twists where unexpected. This book is defiantly a page turner and enjoyable read. I can't wait to reread this novel after a little editing to finish off the shine on this wonderful novel.

ynez2005: I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOOO MUCH!!!!Though you really need to make another book,more Princesses!!! Whoooo!!!Girl Power!!!Mabey it could even be Devona's BFF???That would make it even better!!!Plus can you pleeease make Akki come back,together with Thea and Authur amd the whole family is back!Other th...

daneliacapote116: This was one of my favorites! When you start reading you want to continue I can't wait for the rest of the novel!! The characters where awesome! Everything was great. I encourage you to read this novel, your going to love it it and want to read it more and more !!

Marijana1: The melancholy present throughout this story has the power to influence and etch into the minds of the readers, to stay there and refuse to leave even after they have finished reading the story. This is a deep, powerful story, making the readers wonder about everything – about love, about their e...

Laraine Smith: Your story is both sweet and beautiful! You are a true artist! Keep up the great work! I also love the picture that you chose for your book! :)

More Recommendations

Stephen Warner: To start off, I am thoroughly impressed. The writing style is somewhat unique, and the plot seemed to move at a nice and steady pace. However, I was not expecting this to be a vampire book! I am usually not one for novels about vampires, but I was pleasantly surprised! You wrote with such grace a...

Marimar Amieva: I just can't believe the story! I absolutely loved it, all of it. The characters and their chemistry between them, and the fact that they are relatable. The story also has some sick plot twists, which I never saw coming. I loved the fact that it is an adorable love story but has its mystery touc...

christylynnr5: This was beyond amazing! I loved this book. The characters seemed so real. It was amazing how the author let Zak and Kaylees personalities slowly change. This story was very sad and eye opening. It could teach some people a very worthy lesson. It was a great combination of romance, mystery, and a...

Jennifer Kane Martin: I am a high school teacher, and the dialogue and inner thoughts are PERFECT. However, the lack of capitalization, punctuation, and the typos are distracting. Don't let these get in the way of a potentially good story.

jessica12301990: One of the best books I have read in a while. Could not put it down, loved the characters and how real they felt. Read from start to finish without putting it down. Really hope this gets published and when it does I will be first in line to pick it up.

Hudson: Your story was fantastic Erin! The Rising Sun was one of the first stories I read on Inkitt, and I have to say I don't regret the three to four days I spent pouring through the story.Probably the biggest strength I see in your writing is your characterisation of Eliana, Oriens, and the rest of th...

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.