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El collar

By Evelin Schuldhaus All Rights Reserved ©

Romance

Chapter 1

No te importó en lo más mínimo romper mi corazón. Incluso a veces pienso y me digo a mi misma, que ni siquiera te has dado cuenta de lo que me has hecho. No te culpo, porque ni siquiera sabes que existo. Me culpo a mi misma por haber creído que te importaría. ¿Me habrías por lo menos mirado si las circunstancias fueran otras?. Ya no puedo seguir si sé que no pasaré contigo el resto de mi vida. Tenía esperanzas, pero no fui más que una tonta por habérmelo imaginado. Tal vez nunca sepas que existo, pero a ti no te importa. Tu vida es más importante que yo. Tus días son magníficos, y con la vida que llevas dudo mucho que una persona como yo sea importante. ¡Como cambiaste con el paso del tiempo!. Ahora ni miras hacia atrás. Tal vez sea mejor, no digo que no me gustes como eres. Solo has cambiado, como yo también lo he hecho, pero cada día estoy más lejos de esa persona que solías ser. Esa sonrisa en tu rostro dice más que las palabras en cada canción que compones. Cada vez que las escucho, siento que me faltas. No preguntes si me he enamorado de tu sonrisa, o de tu forma de caminar. Nunca te diré cuando fue la primera vez que te presté atención. No creo que te interese. Pero si sabes como llorar con cada acorde de la guitarra, supongo que entenderás lo que siento. ¿Es que acaso no sabes que eres para mi?.

Pero ya no importa ¿No? Dadas las circunstancias esto jamás lo leerás. Estás demasiado ocupado para eso. He estado mirando esa última entrevista ¿Qué es ese nuevo rumor? Ya no te dejan vivir en paz, aunque creo que como artista jamás la has tenido. Y otra cosa... Esa barba no te queda bien, deberías cambiar tu look. Créeme , tus fans me lo agradecerán. Por otro lado, el azul te siente bien, deberías usarlo más seguido. Además creo saber de qué era esa sonrisa en tu última foto del Twitter. No te preocupes, solo estoy recordando por qué me enamoré de ti. No lloro de tristeza, aunque un poco puede ser. Llenaré mis libros con resaltador, con las metáforas de los poemas que leo antes de dormir. Tu voz resuena en mis oídos en ese nuevo éxito que has lanzado.Impaciente espero que contestes los mensajes que te he estado enviando. ¿Podré olvidarte? No me quería dar por vencida, quise luchar hasta el final, pero hay tantas diferencias que ya no puedo pensar en algo que nos una. Vives del otro lado del mundo, hablas otro idioma, vives una realidad completamente diferente a la mía. Si me vieras una vez, ¿Tendría alguna oportubidad?. Ya qué, no quiero ni pensarlo. Ya he tenido suficiente...

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