Chapter 1
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The story begins with a girl named Misa who is the protagonist, Misa's mother had just passed away, after 3 years of suffering in pain she meets a boy named Haru. He helps her feel better and as time pass by they both fall in love
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Roxanne: Love the story so far, though it definitely needs to be proof read by someone other than the author. There are a lot of words that don't fit the sentence but thankfully most of the time it's not to hard to understand what it was meant to be. Other than that it's has a great plot and I like the ch...
David_Timmsdale_Erotica: Be interested to see where it goes, does she give in, can she go back afterwards?I spent a little too much time looking up words that were USA brand names for items, probably common enough usage in the USA, unheard of elsewhere.That's something I'll remember in my own writing: when using a brand ...