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Melody Dawn Carman Libby: I really like the plot, but the grammar mistakes kill me. The wrong word are used at times and MINES are underground bombs. The correct way to show ownership is to use MINE…Jordan is mine…. She is mine…. Not mines. I would be happy to edit your story if you need some help. 🤗
Mary Edwards: Joust wish there was a lot more to it
Mary Edwards: Love the read.