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Pretty beauty!

By ❤✌♩♪Blue♩♪✌❤ All Rights Reserved ©

Romance

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The story tells something about friendship and love. It should also be a little funny reading to. And create an own opinion and feeling for it. Thank u:)

Chapter 1

Pretty Beauty
It was a hot summer day. I´m a very pretty and small thin girl 12 years old, my fashion style are hot clothes. I´m wearing blue shoes, white leggings, a blue short leather skirt and a red leather corsett. Since a longer time I´m dreaming from a great boyfriend in my age or just a little older or younger. I can be funny sometimes so you can do great jokes with me.
My name is Carolina.
While I´m going to school the birds are singing great melodies for me today. “Tweep, tweep, tweep, tweep, tweeeep!“.
Suddenly there was a stupid boy saying “You´re a so fucking stupid girl!” as he would know me..
Seriously the nature is a great place to do funny things but if someone says “you´re a stupid girl!” you have to fight against it or run away!.In school it was very loud in my class. I wrote some tests today. As I come to realize my marks will be bad, then in a break it happens: “You´re stupid although you´re looking great!” But that isn´t the truth. If you would be stupid, then you wouldn´t have so great interests as me!.Finally at home I was doing my homework as well and training my muscles on a electric bike! I was also sitting down watching TV. My parents died when I was 10 years old through tragic facts: They were alone without me in a holiday and the plane crashed into the woods of an Island! There they were eaten by animals..
Yeah and now I have my own home. I have two older brothers already living alone before me. If I only would have some more friends now. I love to watch anime series, fantasy, romantic and adventure films a lot like I really love listen to most kinds of music. I especially love Symphonic Powermetal and Folk Metal/Rock, Celtic Rock, Rock music, Dance and Techno.
Lovely on a red painted table you can see what I was drawing last week: Great pics of Animes and a very beautiful pic with a sunset and moonlight on it. There also were stars to see and a Pegasus with white big wings on it. Now my phone rings. “Hello, Carolina!“. “Jenny, your new classmate! I watched you in school today I think you´re really a nice person and very pretty! Can we meet for playing?“. “Yes, thank you, I watched you going to the canteen in the break, you looked so funny!” “So I think we can try!”
“Yes, why not?” “So come visiting me here!” “Bye!” “Bye, see u later at 15 o clock!” “Do we want eat a Ice?” “Ok, see u!”
So now I was waiting. It rings and I opened. “Hi! I´m so happy to meet you!” “Push!” Her phone dropped out of her backbag. “Oh I think u need a new backbag maybe I will surprise u with it as a present haha!” “No, honestly, says Carolina, I will help u finding a correct bag on the weekend!” “So what are you´re hobbys?“, I asked. “Listening to music, playing my violin and watching animes or fantasy and other films. I also like swimming, ride a bike or something like that. Would u also like go swim with me today?” “Yeah, yippie, why not haha?” “Well I really love to swim hehe” “Well then!“, means Jenny. We were first watching one of my fav animes. Then we went into the city going through a park with butterflies where u can eat a really delicious ice cream with cone. Yeah we enjoyed the nature with the singing birds “Bra, bra!” and we really loved the ice cream. “Do we want to go in the sea? It´s free and u can swim there!”
“Yeah, why not?” We both had swim clothes in backbags of course but they were the prettiest collection from us as far as we made it for ourself once a day together. In the sea it was nice but very cold today. There was a beach with sand.
We kissed us although were not meant to be together forever, so only for fun...and laughed...After that moment, there was a boy but luckily, he didn´t see anything. We were alone at the sea it was already 21 o´clock. The boy wasn´t really interested in us so he just swim for himself. We laughed and laughed and laughed while we splashed us with water..Suddenly we heared a strange whisper...it shuddered us. It get louder and louder. We were widely out in the water. “I, i, kiss u. kiss u kiss u. I want to kiss you!“. Jenny says laughing but unsure: ”We´re absolutely insoluble in water hehe!” “Heheheehaha!” Then the wisper became silent..“Omg it is dark now. Why?” So it was already dark before and there was a light going into our direction before.
“Maybe you are ill!” “I don´t heared anything!” “But, but, it was there!” We get out of water then it was clear. It was the sound from a handy of another boy who wanted to annoy us a little..but then, after he said, “I want go swim with u too!” I said; “Yeah, we can try if u want have fun with us!“. We stayed not long anymore but it makes us fun with the boy to swim along the water and back. We stared into the moonlight that really enchained us for one hour. Then it was 22:30h we kissed each other and we went home through the park with butterflies..The boy knowed us for longer time and it was our new old friend. He always accepted our kissing fun. We found him so sweet. But sometimes he did jokes with us. And we love it if he do such crazy things with us- of course for fun. If it doesn´t would make fun, it wouldn´t be Ok for us of course.
I want marry him and I also love my girlfriend so we´re lesbies. We want to do a very fun live with our boyfriend in one apartment together. We are very rich together, so we could have many things more like a cool looking car and a driving licence soon. Today is friday. We have eaten a very delicious pizza now in a restaurant that is open for 24hours a day.
“Next week will be the wedding ceremony!“, says Jenny to the boy in our school named Vade.
“Great I´m happy to hear that!”
“Yeah marrying with twelve years! Yiippiee!"
"And we will get a kid. A girl hopefully."
"Yeah, a girl!", means Jenny.
"I love girls", means Vade.
The girlfriend and the boy were going to bed. "It will be one of the hottest nights ever!" They cuddled.
"Please, kiss me!", I said and the boy kissed me.
Jenny feels really great while she was kissing me after that. "Oh, that warm great feeling, Carolina, thank u, we love u forever!" Jenny was overall so pretty cause she´s watching anime as well as me, Carolina. In the morning, Jenny and the boy saw the great anime pics and the pic with the sunset and the moonlight. "Wow u have a great drawing talent!"
"Thank u", I said. Many weeks after holiday we get a kid and it was a girl. We always had fun swimming in our live together, playing, laughing and be sad sometimes. So we loved us forever until we´re dead...
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