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Black Forest

By Debora Hellinga All Rights Reserved ©

Romance

Blurb

short poem what it feels like to go through a rough break-up

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Today my forest is frozen and black;
all colours have ceased
all birds are silenced

The trees are bare
and the world seems to fade
into a mist of nothingness

You crushed my heart
and stabbed my soul
There is nothing I need from you.

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