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Heart Breakers

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Chapter 1

The sun is so bright today, the sky so blue. None of that matters though, because you are the only thing I care about. Everyday and every night you are the only thing that is in my thoughts. You are always present in my dreams, playing my Knight in Shining Armor; my Superman. My heart, forever and always, will belong to you. And yet, I do not have yours. Your heart is in the hands of another.You still love her deeply, even though she has broken not only your trust, but also your heart.

She has received the label of ‘Heart-Breaker’ and she uses it to her advantage. She taunts every male that glances her way with her beautiful looks, and then ensnares them in an endless cycle of give and take, they give and she takes. She was not always like this, just a few years ago, she was exactly like me. Just some girl who ave her heart to the first guy who smiled at her. To the first guy who payed attention to the quiet and shy girl sitting in the back of the class.

The same thing is happening to me now. You give a guy your heart but he does nothing to hold onto it because his own heart does not belong to himself, so it set me on a course. I will try to break every heart I can because someone else broke mine. I know it is not the right thing to do, but I am unable to stop myself.

Little did I know that the next heart I attempt to break actually belongs to the guy who still has ahold of my own. As time goes on, even though I do not realize it, but I am actually falling in love this time. Yet, I am not alone, the two of us are falling together. Now, I am able to enjoy the brightness of the sun, the colors of the world that surrounds me, but I am not alone, I am with you, and I could not be happier.

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