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A Princess Tale ( still working on the story )

By Naweltoumi2015 All Rights Reserved ©

Drama / Romance

where the story begins

″ A princess or a Queen is that who Seizes the heart , not the kingdom , not the throne ″


it was the year 1940 , world war II had just declared one year ago , but citizens were already sick of it

Princess Charlotte woke up at the sound of the maid cleaning the curtains, the sun was shining on her face. ″ you should get up Mrs, hurry ″ one of the maids said ″ why? I want to sleep ″ Charlotte turned to the other side, closing her eyes again ″ My lady, you have to get up Now!! You still have a lot of things to do, don’t forget that your uncle is coming ″ ″I totally forgot about them coming ″ she said weakly then woke up and walked to the mirror

Princess Charlotte was the youngest daughter of king Philip and Queen Alexandra of Britain, she was also so beautiful, she was slim with long blonde hair, but her blue eyes were the most attractive thing in her , she was only 19 years old, but she was well-educated and kind to everyone, However, Charlotte didn’t feel like she belonged to the royal world and traditions, she wanted a simple life or at least a simple day where she can do what she wants, wear anything, or speak like any plain person, without any rules. She wished she was just a Plain girl .

The maid was fixing her hair, when someone opened the door and walked inside, it was her sister, Princess Julie, Julie was more strict, more respectful to rules, more severe, she was 29 years old

″ good morning, little sister ″ she sat on the bed of her sister ″ good morning Julie ″ Charlotte smiled ″ what are you going to wear today?″ my red dress, or what do you think? ″ ″ we are not throwing a party, Charlotte, it’s a just a family meeting, wear something simple but elegant, this dress, for example, is good ″ she pointed to a beautiful white dress ″ alright then ″

″ I will leave you now, see you later ″

when Charlotte finished , she walked to the guest room, her parent, her sister, her uncle, his wife, and her cousin, Marguerite were all sitting there

″ oh Charlotte darling, you’ve grown up ″ her uncle hugged her

″ hello uncle ″ she smiled: Marguerite ″ she turned to her cousin and gave her a hug , Charlotte didn’t like her cousin so much , Marguerite was a girl who loves partying and having fun a lot, and she was always putting Charlotte in trouble ″ Charlotte, how are you? ″ ″ I’m fine, how are you? Charlotte faked a smile″ ″ very fine, there are a lot of things I wanted to tell you about, dad can we go out, please? ″ Marguerite begged ″ you and who ? ″ her father asked ″ me and Charlotte of course dad ″ ″ alright then, you can go out, but don’t be late ″ ″ okay dad thank you so much ″ Marguerite ran away in excitement , and Charlotte followed her

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