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Love is a crime

By Crowley_SPN All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Romance

Chapter 1

Lauran McRae is a simple bartender she works at the Fair Spare Bar. Lauran loves working there but lately every Wednesday a man shows up in the same exact outfit a long black coat with a black hat that covers his face. He always sits on the other side of the bar, He just sits there doesn’t move at all. Lauran finds the man creepy but she ignores him. That night when she goes to work she see him sitting in the same seat, her boss asks if she okay when she sees her staring at the guy. Lauran shook her head yes and continued with her work. The guy continued to sit there drinking his glass of Whiskey and Scotch.

Tonight was a busy night Lauran tried to keep her head clear but she just felt uneasy about that guy, just sitting there drinking his Whiskey and Scotch. She couldn’t take it any longer she had to find out who he is. After the bar closed Lauran saw the man leaving, she followed him down the street and as soon as she had the chance she went to ask who he was. When she was about to stop him to ask, he turned around and pushed her against any alley wall “who are you and what do you want?” he asked angrily. “I-I’m Lauran from the Fair Spare Bar and I want to talk to you,” she said scared as he stared into her eyes. “I need to know why you sit there and stare at me every Wednesday, “she says as he lets go of her. “I love you that’s why I come there every Wednesday “he blushes “I know it’s the busy night for you so I like to come there “. Lauran stares him in the eyes for a few minutes then she kisses him, she has never felt this way about a guy before.

Lauran is a lesbian, she normally doesn’t like men only women. Know she felt weird for liking a man she doesn’t know but his blue eyes make her want more of him. Lauran kisses him again and they begin to make out. Lauran doesn’t know who he is but she likes him more than anyone she has ever met. “I love you “She whispers as he walks into his apartment with her in his arms. “I’m going to take you into my play room where I make love to pretty women like you”. Lauran smiles brightly as he lays her on the bed and takes off her pants. “Fuck me, fuck me hard” she screams excitedly “oh I will I’ll fuck you so hard you won’t be able to leave” he smiles at Lauran. The guy rips her shirt off and removes his clothes “are you ready?” Lauran nods and starts making out with him as he shoves his long member into Lauran. She moans into his mouth as her tongue twists around his and he thrusts hard into her. He thrusts harder and harder and she moans while kissing him “harder baby harder” she screams and he thrusts harder. He soon fills her pussy with his delicious cum “I want you to suck my dick “. Lauran follows orders and gets on her knees, she begins sucking his dick. The mysterious man moans as he pulls her hair while she sucks more. Lauran sucks his dick till he cums in her mouth.

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