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Fantasies of an Idle Mind

By JuneRoy All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

A Night to Remember: Intro

We kissed under the waxing moon,

As the waves crashed and battered against the dunes

Tonight was a night we let go

Oh! The madness that had begun to flow

She stood by the window as the moonlight streamed in; the waxing moon shining with aplomb. She looked enchanting against the pale light, her hands clutching the edges as her eyes gazed at the beauty outside. All she wore was a thin see-through gown that clung to her slender figure

Secluded and cut off from the outside world, this resort was a couple’s paradise. Very few knew of its existence and I wished it remained the same. In the distance were a few lanterns that shook and danced to the tune of the boisterous wind

“Hey love, what’s keeping you awake at this time of the night?” I asked her from where I lay

“I just can’t sleep with such beauty around me” she replied

I dragged myself out of the bed and stood by her side; it was indeed surreal outside

“I am lucky we managed to get this room” I whispered in her ears

“It is my love and not a soul comes by this side” she replied with a naughty twinkle in her eyes. I loved the way she played the game; subtle hints and innocent taunts

“It would be a crime to waste away this night” I replied playing along

“Ahan! What then would you say we do?” she purred as she placed her hands around my neck

“Whatever your heart desires” I said and began to fondle her. I loved the way she bit her lip in response to my touches. All it took was a loving caress and I could feel the hardness from inside her gown

She was losing herself to the touches and responded with a passionate kiss. Her hands ruffled my hair as we played with one another; our tongues dancing to the tune of the waves outside. I picked her up and set her on the ledge as we went about kissing. She had wrapped her legs round my hips and pulled me closer

“You seem to be waking up my love” she said as she felt it nudge against her thighs and with that she let one hand slide down below. With every caress I could feel myself throb a little harder and with every passing second I came closer and closer to the end. Just as I was about to let go, she suddenly pulled her hands away and pushed me hard. It was this state of madness that she liked me in; when I was the most vulnerable to her wishes

“Perhaps it was time we let mother-nature be a witness tonight” she said and walked towards the doorway and just as she was about to step out, she loosened the gown and let it fall

It took me a few seconds to realize what she had just done. The night had just begun…

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