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A sweet and short love story that started with a cake and smiles❤️❤️

Romance / Humor
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First Meeting 👩‍❤️‍👨

Sometimes all we need is a good person in our lives, who is with us in every moment of our lives whether it is sadness, happiness, or anything. Everyone around me had someone they call their " Soul mate" but I didn't. To be honest, I didn't even have a good friend in my life.

Yes, I had few friends you can say but we were not very close. It was just like " Hi, how are you?, See you, bye" type of friendship. Everyone wishes for special someone in their life but my wish was for a good and trustworthy person with whom I can share everything that I can't share with my parents and siblings.

Oh!! I am sorry I didn't introduce myself, Hello I am a 16-year-old teenager who dreams of becoming become a poet. There is nothing much to know about me except I am very anti-social, sarcastic, and very bad at making friends.

But that changed one day, I guess the fact that you will meet your soulmate one day is not false because I did and it was the best thing that ever happened in my life.

So, one day I went to a pastry shop that I love so much. Yes, I have sweet tooth. I can eat a whole cake if you just give me a spoon and a whole cake.

So back to the pastry shop, I was arguing with myself inside my head about what flavor to choose. Yes, It is a very important and hard decision to make when you have like 100s of flavor in front of you making you drool.

" Did you decided what flavor you want mam ?" The girl behind the counter asked me.

" Yeah, just give me a second" I replied.

She looked at me and sighed at went to attend to another customer.
Well, they have been working the whole day, I can't blame them for being tired and irritated.

"Try that one, It tastes awesome" A voice sounded behind me.

I turned and don't laugh at what I am about to say next but time stopped as our eyes met. At that moment I understood why people used to use a phrase like " Time stopped, the world doesn't mean anything" type things in romantic novels and movies.
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LUZBETH: Es un libro interesante, pero le falta más trama, más desarrollo en los personajes y en la historia, además debe ser más larga, me deja con la intriga

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