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Messed Up

By Shannon Lin All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Romance

Blurb

They have changed, they have gone. But, I still have the nightmares.

Chapter 1

***Flashback***

“Mommy, I’m hungry! Mommy? Mommy!” I yelled. I am hungry, where is mommy?

“What do you want whore?” Mommy asked.

This is not the mommy I know. Mommy is nice and kind and...And....

“Answer me you whore,” mommy yelled at me.

I cried and mommy slapped me, kicking me in the ribs. I screamed out in pain, in protest. This isn’t my mommy. This is not the mommy I know.

“Get out whore!” Mommy yelled and slammed the door after I was pushed out.

I started crying calling out for mommy....mommy. I want my real mommy.

***End of flashback***

My life was destroyed. I had this dream every day when Calveice was not with me. I bolted up in bed, wiping my tears away.

“Are you play madam?” My maid Candy asked. Candy aways loved candy, that’s how she got her name.

“Yes, candy? Have you took the candy this morning?” I asked she was used to eating candy in the morning at least once.

Candy’s eye brightened,“Of course Ann.”

I rolled my eyes,“Candy...Oh! How could I forget?!” Today was Calveice’s birthday. His reaching of age, when he finds a mate. I flushed at my thoughts, surely his father the king promises are that we will have the right. That’s if Calveice doesn’t change his feeling,I am his bride.

“Madam, today is special, I see you remembered,“Candy said.

I jumped off the bed, giving my myself half an hour to get ready. A smile curled up my lips. Calveice!!!!!

“I guess the future king will expect you now,” Candy giggled.

“Aye, me too,” I called back as I skipped down the hall, carrying my present for him.

I slid his door open, gently so he can’t hear me. I stated at him at he pace back and forth in his room. I listen to his steady breathing, as I tiptoed to him. I giggled softly as I now in his ears,“You look so cute today.”

He looked behind and found me, drowning seeing me on tiptoed. He must have wonder how I was able to reach him. He looked at me and a grin grew up his face. He picks me up and spins me around.

“Ahh, put me down!” I screamed, but he didn’t instead he lift me up higher. “Put me down!” I screamed again. He ignored me, so I closed my eyes. Most people here knew I was scared of heights. “Please put me down,” I whined and used my puppy face. He backs off lifting one of his hands up. His fear was me crying. He gave me a look of sorry and smirked throwing me down on his bed. I frowned and started kicking him. I knew he had an evil plan in mind. Calveice pins me on the bed and started to tickle me. I started squealing turning around in his best-made bed. He laughs enjoying his own joke.

“Excuse me,I might have to steal the Prince for a second,“one of the advisors said nodding at me.

Calveice stands up struggled, fixed his suit and tie, kissing my forehead, giving me an apologizing look and left.

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