This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.
By stevie_flood All Rights Reserved ©
To the borrowed Gentleman,
I sat up for hours and hours waiting for you to enter through that door, yet you came had your way with me and out you went once more.
As confused as I am in this moment, I am only wondered what you will do next. I wonder what it’s like to face your family after all that you have done, and think of all the excuses you made why you were late for your daughter's bed time story. Why you still smelt as fresh as you did the moment you left this morning and your Mrs. never once assumed you were here with me. I think of the moments we've crossed paths in public and I bat my eye lashes pretending, that I don't know you. And yet you play your twisted mind games and still send over that flower on Valentine’s Day. I wonder how a beautiful person as yourself; would walk away from work in the middle of a shift just to spend time with someone like me! What's missing in your life that can't be for filled by the other woman waiting for you at home? You've continuously said that you love me... but do I need to be the one to have you walk in and out of my life as you please? You were a mistake. And I realize that now. But why do I think that I will never find someone that could change my life the way you did?
As I walk away from my past and watch the shimmering daylight fades to dusk, I pray that the day has finally come. Where I can face you like a stranger, and undo all the faults I have done to be repaired and never undone!
Haley’s Story
Even if it doesn't end happily ever after, its still worth it if it made you feel something new, and if it taught you something new. - Unknown
Stephen Warner: To start off, I am thoroughly impressed. The writing style is somewhat unique, and the plot seemed to move at a nice and steady pace. However, I was not expecting this to be a vampire book! I am usually not one for novels about vampires, but I was pleasantly surprised! You wrote with such grace a...
maewilde25: I am so in love with this story!!! captivated me till the very end, there wasn't a dull moment. Didn't particularly enjoy the lay out and some bits of info was missing along with how a 21 year old man amassed so much wealth that needed to be explained other than that and a few spelling errors, th...
Sandra Estrada: I loved every minute of it and I thank my lucky stars that brought me to the story, it's been a whirlwind of emotions, plot twist after plot twist but I never got tired of them. Abby and Kade's story is a hard one to understand but once you're submerged in their story and love, you can't help but...
Satabda Chatterjee: Each and every charecter develops during the whole course of the journey and keeps secretly love for the princess . However the way that writter expressed each situatuons that the princess faced quite relevant and keeps the suspense always at the end of the chapter. . . .which makes the reader m...
rudyoxborough46: An action-packed, mystical adventure awaits anyone wishing to read this novel. I’m amazed at how well you’ve managed to flesh out the characters in this book, and I hope to read more of your work.I’ve read books about goblins and elves and all that mumbo-jumbo before, and most accounts of these c...
Alex Rushmer: This was not what I expected, but I enjoyed it a lot Malfoy was always one of the characters that I liked a lot, so I like that a lot of this happens between him and Colette. I read the first couple chapters, and I enjoyed your writing style and am excited to see where you take this story. My com...
Hudson: Your story was fantastic Erin! The Rising Sun was one of the first stories I read on Inkitt, and I have to say I don't regret the three to four days I spent pouring through the story.Probably the biggest strength I see in your writing is your characterisation of Eliana, Oriens, and the rest of th...
Flik: Hi! ^.^ huge fan of yours on ff.net! When I saw the note about this contest on The Way We Smile, I couldn't help but rush over here, create an account, and vote! XD Seriously love this story and would recommend it to anyone! :D best FT fanfiction out there. Amazing story, amazing concept that wa...
kwilliams: I am an avid reader, and I do mean AVID and few indie authors capture my attention the way you have. I absolutely fell in love with these characters and their story. I'm usually not a fan of the cliff hanger endings (be it a series or not), but this one made me download the Kindle app just so I c...
christylynnr5: This was beyond amazing! I loved this book. The characters seemed so real. It was amazing how the author let Zak and Kaylees personalities slowly change. This story was very sad and eye opening. It could teach some people a very worthy lesson. It was a great combination of romance, mystery, and a...
