This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.
By stevie_flood All Rights Reserved ©
To the borrowed Gentleman,
I sat up for hours and hours waiting for you to enter through that door, yet you came had your way with me and out you went once more.
As confused as I am in this moment, I am only wondered what you will do next. I wonder what it’s like to face your family after all that you have done, and think of all the excuses you made why you were late for your daughter's bed time story. Why you still smelt as fresh as you did the moment you left this morning and your Mrs. never once assumed you were here with me. I think of the moments we've crossed paths in public and I bat my eye lashes pretending, that I don't know you. And yet you play your twisted mind games and still send over that flower on Valentine’s Day. I wonder how a beautiful person as yourself; would walk away from work in the middle of a shift just to spend time with someone like me! What's missing in your life that can't be for filled by the other woman waiting for you at home? You've continuously said that you love me... but do I need to be the one to have you walk in and out of my life as you please? You were a mistake. And I realize that now. But why do I think that I will never find someone that could change my life the way you did?
As I walk away from my past and watch the shimmering daylight fades to dusk, I pray that the day has finally come. Where I can face you like a stranger, and undo all the faults I have done to be repaired and never undone!
Haley’s Story
Even if it doesn't end happily ever after, its still worth it if it made you feel something new, and if it taught you something new. - Unknown
christylynnr5: This was beyond amazing! I loved this book. The characters seemed so real. It was amazing how the author let Zak and Kaylees personalities slowly change. This story was very sad and eye opening. It could teach some people a very worthy lesson. It was a great combination of romance, mystery, and a...
OpheliaJones: This story took a different kind of spin on the "normal girl lives with definitely not normal guy" plot. The plot points of Frey's father, Liam's family, and Frey's view of Liam's world were good to read. She did not fall in love with him in the first couple weeks. Their lives were not smooth in ...
263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...
emmaneal74: I loved this booked. Would definitely buy it when published and read it again. The story flowed in such a way I just couldn't put it down. I was never confused about the characters or their roles in the story which can happen sometimes with so many lead. I'd recommend this to anyone wanting to r...
Ruby0h: Overall I thought your story was really good! It drew me in right away and kept me interested as the story progressed. I loved the character of Kayla being inserted into this story, and the way she affected and shaped the life of the original story into something totally new and interesting. I lo...
maewilde25: I am so in love with this story!!! captivated me till the very end, there wasn't a dull moment. Didn't particularly enjoy the lay out and some bits of info was missing along with how a 21 year old man amassed so much wealth that needed to be explained other than that and a few spelling errors, th...
Alex Rushmer: This was not what I expected, but I enjoyed it a lot Malfoy was always one of the characters that I liked a lot, so I like that a lot of this happens between him and Colette. I read the first couple chapters, and I enjoyed your writing style and am excited to see where you take this story. My com...
ynez2005: I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOOO MUCH!!!!Though you really need to make another book,more Princesses!!! Whoooo!!!Girl Power!!!Mabey it could even be Devona's BFF???That would make it even better!!!Plus can you pleeease make Akki come back,together with Thea and Authur amd the whole family is back!Other th...
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...
