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The girl just looked at her computer and found a post on her favorite page on facebook from and saw the guy was sorta upset. He thought he was ugly but to her she thought otherwise. She friended him and messaged him.
“Heyyyyy” she giggled out loud from her message
“Hi” he messaged her back.
“How are you?” she asked him
“Good.” he said back
“Nice. your cute” she giggled
“Thanks” he smiled at her message. He thought she was really sweet and cute.
“So... how old are you?” he asked her
“15” she told him. He nodded his head and smiled. He then couldn’t answer he had to go to school.
“Hello?” she asked him. “Are you on?” she sighed “ok then.”
“Be patient with me please” he begged her. She sighed and nodded her head. Days go by and she ends up seeing she sorta liked him in a way. He knew he liked her from day one. But he didn’t know himself tell one day he asked her. She said yes. They started dating but things changed after that day. Things that nobody would understand tell they actually say. They were one. They were a shocker. They were in love with each other more than they thought. One day they notice how much they need each other. They went to a step they never knew could happen at such a young age. They surprised them selves. They never knew, but it never just came out of the blue. Something happened between them. Something big. Something shocking. They never knew what would happen between them. Not until the day. They became one, but not just because of a message. Because of a fight that took to many far steps. A step that one didn’t want to take but did to prove her point. One that she learned, trusting is better than not trusting.
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...
izzymerchant: This book is truly special. The plot, the characters and the way the story flows is so engrossing and magical that I found it virtually impossible to put down. The character relationships were particularly fascinating and Melenthia's character was fascinating. Cannot wait to see what happens next!
_Dusks_kiss: I never knew that one of my favourite childhood cartoons could turn into such a beautiful story. Tho there are many grammatical errors and writing errors, this story warmed my heart to 100%. I would definitely want this book to get published and I would also buy it. It’s amazing character develop...
nehmeyasmin: It was the most heart warming but heart breaking story ever and I want the next part right away. It kept me hooked until the end even though there were a couple mistakes it was truly amazing. I think this book could go far if it wanted to
ArgyrisMetaxas: Thrilling story which builds layer ontop of layer. A few mis spellings every few chapters.What I found special was that it took a modern day problem and took it to its logical conclusion and plays this realism with gritting precision. I'm always on edge ready to shout from adrenaline. This is gre...