Primation Season 1

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Summary

“Omi-Johnson Brook, 23 counts of theft, 45 counts of public damage, 16 counts of disturbing the peace, 6 counts of indecency, and 1 million counts of pissing me off.” OJ “huh?” RAPHEAL “huh indeed" In a world full of greed, endless death and mind twisting, inhumane experiments, most notably the "Primation" Experiment, A young Homeless boy from the depths of Medway city strives to change this gloomy world for the better based on the peaceful ideals of his Mother and Father before him but soon finds out it will take more of himself then he ever imagined to do so. ----------a heads up------------ Hey, Just to let you all know that this story is currently in script form, with each episode being a chapter. The reason for this being that I am first and foremost a Animator, However I am very interested in The writing side of Animation, and so to get feedback on my scripting I am posting them here to better myself in the future. When a episode is animated and fully published I will post a link to it within that chapter also. Thanks and enjoy the story! P.S With the fact that it is a converted Celtx script document comes the fact that Inkitt decided to add unnecessary breaks in sentences, I tried to fix this manually but i may have missed some. Apologies in advance.

Genre:
Scifi / Adventure
Author:
J_Walk
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
1
Rating:
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating:
13+

Episode 1 Medway City I

PHARMACY INT NOON

[THE SCREEN STARTS BLACK BUT THEN FADES INTO A LOCAL PHARMACY OWNERS SWEATY FACE]

The pharmacy owner glances up at the CCTV to which reveals what’s got him sweating so much, a hooded figure down one of the isles.

The hooded figure then slowly grabs a pill flask on one of the shelves, he hesitates, looks around and slowly reaches to put them into his pocket, however as he does the pharmacy owner reacts and presses a button beneath the counter which sounds the alarm.

1 PHARMACY OWNER “THIEF!”

MEDWAY CITY CENTRAL EXT NOON

The hooded figure then dashes for the exit and onto a futuristic street, he turns to dash one way but suddenly comes face to face with a police officer with a lot of high tech gear, he then back pedals and starts sprinting in the opposite direction.

He bolts across a road, jumping over cars and dashing down a alleyway. He then jumps onto a dumpster and climbs a ladder to the rooftops while the officers pursue.

As he reaches the top the officers get thrown to the top by their grapple devices and continue chasing the hooded figure. The chase goes on over a couple of rooftops as the hooded figure and the officers can be seen jumping from rooftop to rooftop. the hooded figure zips down someones washing and front flips to a overpass as the hooded figure lands a officer grabs him but he escapes and knocks him out with a quick kick and uppercut.

He then looks to the edge of the overpass to where a river lies along with many other apartment complex’s.

He stands on the edge as the officers surround him

2 OFFICER

“Citizen, Step away from the

edge!”

The hidden figure then free falls back into the abyss below.

The officers react and run to the edge to locate their target but they are too late, they then send officers in multiple directions to scout for the hooded figure.

MEDWAY CITY ROUTE 717 EXT [HOMELESS SETUP]EVENING

The hooded figure free falls until he lands on a mattress within a dumpster full of rubbish.

[THE CAMERA ZOOMS INTO THE SIDE OF THE DUMPSTER TO THEN SLOWLY SEE A HAND RISE HOLDING THE STOLEN PILLS. THE CAMERA THEN SWITCHES TO A BIRDS EYE VIEW OF THE HOODED FIGURE TO REVEAL PART OF HIS FACE AND HAT, REVEALING THAT IT IS OJ]

OJ continues to walk down the underpass next to the river until he starts to enter a homeless setup.

He walks past barrels lit on fire with multiple homeless surrounding them with other homeless scattered across the landscape, thus signaling the entrance to the setup.

OJ then catches eye with a homeless he recognizes, he smiles as the homeless man merrily jutters towards him.

3 BEN

“OJ my boy where have ya been cruising ta today ma wee lad”

4 OJ

“Just getting some of my momma’s reversine[ree-ver-sign] pills”

5 BEN

“ah ye a good lad, but ma hope ye didn’t steal them, I know the city police will have your record but soon dem zero Larcer’s will come across it and den bam, you look like meh”

Ben dramatically takes his hood of to reveal his primated face. Other homeless around the area look at Ben in disgust. Ben then slowly puts his hood back up. However he looks to OJ, who is just smiling with a huge grin while holding the back of his head.

6 OJ

“heh,yeah your right, I cant be looking like your ugly mug haha”

7 BEN

“oh is that so eh boy? well I guess ye won’t be wantin deez beauties”

Ben holds out 3 oranges in front of OJ’s face. OJ, now completely pale as he holds out his hands and turns away with a somber voice.

8 OJ “not want them?! what monster would ever refuse a orange, do you take me for some sort of monkey looking savage?” OJ taunts while pointing at Ben.

9 BEN

“ha te flippin ha ye we trouble maker”

Ben then grabs OJ and gives him a noogie before pushing him off in the direction he was originally walking while stuffing the orange into his pocket

10 BEN

“now go on ye, I’ve made ye and ye beautiful mother some magnificent porridge pudding!”

11 OJ

“I really wish he would stop cooking for us”

OJ says with a huge grin on his face as he walks away but bumps into a old drunken homeless man near one of the fires

12 OLD DRUNK

“How many times have a told you, to not trifle with the likes of that primated scum, do you even realize what damage his kind has done to our city and the world? they murdered our beloved zero queen”

OJ looks at the man with a extremely serious look in his eyes

13 OJ

“Ben had as much to do with the queens death as you did old man, now...GET,OUT,Of,MY,FACE”

OJ then continues walking

14 OLD DRUNK

“So you think because you went to combat school for three years your all tough now huh boy?”

The old drunk then whispers to himself as OJ walks away

15 OLD DRUNK

“we’ll just see how tough you really are”

The old drunk then smashes his bottle on the floor as he grabs his cell and pushes a button on it.

OJ then arrives at his mothers setup, she is seen laying down in a sleeping bag eating some of Ben’s porridge with a bowl ready next to her, OJ sits beside it.

16 LUCY

“You where gone a long time sweetie”

Lucy has a somewhat stern look on her face.

OJ scratches the back of his head after downing the porridge in one

17 OJ

“heh, yeah, was searching dumpsters again”

18 LUCY

“I really wish you wouldn’t do that OJ, you might get sick”

19 OJ

“well i found something to help your “sick”, look!”

OJ shoves the pills in front of Lucy’s face to her surprise, her face then darkens.

20 LUCY

“The exact pills I need...”

21 OJ

“yup”

22 LUCY

“how convenient”

23 OJ “yeah..”

Lucy then grabs the pill container and studies them, her eyes then light up with rage

24 LUCY “Today’s date huh?!”

OJ’s smile turns into a thrown for a split moment and then a small smirk

25 OJ

“guess we got lucky!”

Lucy hits OJ across the head

26 LUCY

“Don’t give me that bull Omi-Johnson Brook!, I know you stole these, this is the fourth time this month, for god sake 6 more people from this setup where kidnapped by zero Larcerners last night! Do you want to be next?! I mean for gods sake you’ve seen what they did to Ben!”

OJ’s smirk then turns into a serious look

27 OJ

“What am I supposed to do mum, watch you die?!”

Lucy’s face turns pale as she looks to the side

28 LUCY

“I’m not going to die...”

OJ looks at his mother with a confused face, Lucy then looks back at OJ smiling

29 LUCY

“I have to stay alive until you grow up and become a man! And that starts with knowing right from wrong!”

30 OJ

“well to keep you alive I’ll just have to stay a kid forever”

OJ chuckles along with his mother. Lucy then hits OJ on the shoulder

“ow”

31 OJ

32 LUCY

“oh, OJ you definitely have your fathers stubbornness but unfortunately you picked up my terrible sense of humor”

The two smile at each other as the scene fades to black

UNKNOWN ZERO LAB INT EVENING

33 SGT JOE

“Sir I beg of you, allow me this one request, I have done everything you have asked me for 15 years without hesitation, allow me this opportunity to see over it personally.”

Heckler then looks to the side in almost disgust

34 DR HECKLER “hmph, Very well”

Joe then exits the room, a smile then appears on Hecklers face

MEDWAY CITY CENTRAL EXT MORNING

The screen slowly fades in from black and shows OJ sitting on a street curb watching as others go by there usual lives, he then spots a girl with cherrywood hair who catches his interest, he realizes he knows her, he looks down in hesitation, but then gets a determined look on his face, stands and goes to talk to her, but before he can even cross the street a police van pulls up.

4 officers pour out of the van, He punches one officer to the floor and kicks another but is tasered by another, the screen goes black as OJ passes out.

MEDWAY CITY CENTRAL POLICE STATION INT MORNING

35 RAPHEAL

“Omi-Johnson Brook, 23 counts of theft, 45 counts of public damage, 16 counts of disturbing the peace, 6 counts of...indecency, and 1 million counts of pissing me off.”

36 OJ “huh?”

37 RAPHEAL

" “huh” indeed, (sigh) I thought you would turn out to be better than this OJ, its a miracle Zero Larcer’s haven’t abducted you yet.”

38 OJ

“your not my father rapheal”

Rapheal suddenly looks hurt, but then the hurt turns to anger

39 RAPHEAL

“listen, the only reason I haven’t locked you up right this second is because Rachel still believes in you, and to an extent, so do I”

rapheal drops the huge file he just read out off on his desk

40 RAPHEAL

“I mean look at this thing...”

41 OJ

“well, I do hear that size matters”

OJ’s grin can be seen from the other side of the world

42 RAPHEAL “when will you gro-”

Rapheal is then cut of by the cherrywood girl from earlier bursting through the door of the office with a stern look on her face.

43 RAPHEAL

“Rachel, you know you cant just-”

44 RACHEL

“Daddy, can I have a moment with the future convict”

rapheal takes a moment, takes a deep breath and then states;

45 RAPHEAL “allright, make it quick”

Rapheal exits the room, the door creaks shut and Rachel and OJ stare at each other in silence for a moment until OJ breaks the silence with;

46 OJ

“well, you’ve grown up to be quite pretty rach-”

47 RACHEL

“Don’t even try it OJ, I lived with you for 6 years, I know exactly when your making up crap to try and get out of a situation”

48 OJ

“I may be trying to get out of the situation but it wasn’t cra-”

49 RACHEL

“I thought we brought you up better”

50 OJ

“I didn’t ask for you guys to raise me”

51 RACHEL

“no your mother did..when will you grow up and- what are you doing?

by this point OJ has gotten up and started looking around the room for an escape route, he then centers on a window at the back

52 OJ

"well here is how its gonna go Rachel, I’m gonna escape, you can either help me, or sit there, your choice”

53 RACHEL

“OJ man, your throwing away your future!”

OJ mumbles to himself

54 OJ “what future...”

as OJ continues fiddling with the window Rachel perks up as she hears a thud come from outside the door, she then slowly opens it to see her father on the floor with a bullet wound to the stomach, Rachel in shock and fear hiccups and whispers;

55 RACHEL “daddy?!”

56 RAPHEAL “Larcer’s! run!”

Rachel then shuts the door but it closes to loudly and two masked figure realize the location of there targets and move towards the door, Rachel then passes over to OJ,

grabs his arm and whispers

57 RACHEL

“OJ, we have to go, NOW!”

58 OJ

“ah see I knew you would come along”

The two masked men burst through the door and aim there stun weapons at Rachel and OJ, OJ then quickly reacts and throws a lamp at them which smashes on one of the masked Mans face and shrouds the room in darkness, as the masked man turn the light back on Rachel and OJ are nowhere to be seen as they escape quickly out of the window.

OJ and Rachel then start sprinting towards the homeless setup with the masked men I close pursuit

59 RACHEL

“Why are the zero Larcer’s killing police officials!”

60 OJ

" I don’t know but if ya ever want to find out I suggest you

keep up!”

OJ and Rachel then arrive at the homeless setup and hide by Lucy’s corner

61 LUCY

“Rachel! what a lovely surprise, my haven’t you grown up to be pretty”

62 RACHEL

“Hi Mrs B um thanks you look wel-”

63 OJ

“MUM WE ARE BEING CHASED BY LARCER’S!”

64 LUCY

“What?!, kids stand behind me, Ben!”

Ben then appears from below a sheet of steel next to the group

65 BEN

“I’m way ahead of ye”

Ben and Lucy scan the area for the masked men but suddenly turn around to see them staring right at them, they then outstretch there arms in front of Rachel and OJ.

66 ZERO LARCENER

“move aside so we may quire our targets”

67 LUCY “I’d rather die”

Lucy then places a voice clip device into OJ;s hands without anyone seeing. The two Larcer’s then look at each other, nod and then pull a switch on there weapons and fire at Ben and Lucy, killing them both, as Rachel is knocked out screaming OJ just stares blankly in disbelief at the sight of his deceased mother grasping the voice

clip device tighter and tighter until he is knocked out by one of the Larcer’s.

THE SCREEN THEN FADES TO BLACK

ZERO LAB CELL UNIT MEDWAY CITY INT NIGHT

OJ then awakes to the sound of Rachel’s heavy breathing, his eyes slowly open as his vision has been blurred from the hit to the head as well as the tears from before.

he slowly gets up and realizes he has been put in confined cell with Rachel next to him.

68 RACHEL

“OJ! your awake, thank god!”

OJ gives a slight but crooked smile to Rachel as he can see she has been comforted with his presence.

He looks up around at his surroundings, he then realizes a band attached to Rachel’s arm.

69 OJ

“Who gave you that?”

70 RACHEL

“A dude in a white cloak, they said they needed my blood-type...OJ, I’m scared” OJ then puts his hand over Rachel’s

he then remembers the crazy stories Ben used to tell him about the zero labs and the primation experiments, he realizes Rachel has been selected next. suddenly OJ’s face goes pale from the shock of remembering the events that occurred.

Tears start to form on OJ’s face as he remembers his mother,Rachel’s eye’s begin swelling also.

OJ then pulls out the voice device his mother put in his pocket before he died. his eyes begin to swell again as he pushes the play button, there is a bit of a pause before Lucy’s Voice comes pouring out.

71 LUCY

“OJ,(pause) I was hoping you would never have to hear this from a voice clip heh, But if your listening to this now, I couldn’t protect and stay with you until you became a man(pause), but there are things you need to know, many many things, too many things, but some are best kept in the dark for now, I’m sure you will find those answers eventually but all I want you to know is...your a good person OJ, to the core, and I want you to make a difference in this tragic world, your special, even if you don’t know it yet, I’ve seen it inside you your whole life...bring peace to this world and its people, Stop the fighting and the greed, like me and your father tried to...we obviously didn’t succeed haha, but we planted the seeds for success, within you. please, bring hope and peace to the people of this world, I love you so much my son...and one last thing, don’t go looking for your father...if hes not already dead, he will only try to stand in your way,do not let him, I love you but this is goodbye”.

the last bit of the clip is muffled

72 YOUNG OJ

“hey mum what are you doing?”

73 LUCY

“none of your biz young man .”

The clip abruptly ends and OJ drops the recording, as he does tears fall onto the device, OJ looking at Rachel with tears streaming down his face closes his eyes and abruptly opens them with a serious and determined look in his eyes.

Rachel’s eyes which are swelling slightly looks at OJ with slight confusion as he moves his hand from hers and grabs the band of her arm which injures her slightly.

74 RACHEL

“ow, OJ what are you doing?”

75 OJ

“Your here because of me, and my stupid mistakes, you don’t deserve my punishment, you don’t deserve any of this Rachel”

Rachel sits in stunned silence unable to react to OJ’s determination, suddenly the cell door opens with a man in a white cloak and a guard standing on the other side, the guard then comes in, scans the two for a split second, spots OJ’s arm band and grabs and cuffs him and drags him out, Rachel try’s to stop the guard but is put down with a small zap.

the cell door then closes and Rachel returns to the corner she originally was in, curls into a ball and puts her head in her knees.

ZERO LAB (PRIMATION DEPARTMENT) MEDWAY CITY INT NIGHT

OJ is taken into the Primation department and strapped into a huge tube connected to another separate device. OJ struggles but the restraints don’t budge.

the tube then begins filling with purple liquid until it completely submerges OJ, he holds his breath but eventually gives out and starts to consume the liquid unwillingly, eventually OJ passes out, at that point

electricity starts phasing through the tube from the other segment of the machine. electrifying the liquid and animating OJ’s body wildly, bringing his conscious back momentarily.

OJ’s body then begins to change to which the audience cannot fully see.

the man in the white cloak then pulls a lever to dismiss the machine and the electricity stops and the tube slowly drains.

they lower OJ’s restraints and he collapses to the floor immediately, the man in the white cloak checks his pulse to confirm that he survived and the guard then carries OJ back to the cell while the man in the cloak analysis the results of the test.

ZERO LAB CELL UNIT MEDWAY CITY INT NIGHT

OJ is then thrown back into the cell against the wall close to Rachel where he lay there for a number of hours.

OJ then awakens and faces Rachel, which puts a small smile onto his face, however his smile turns into confusion at the sight of Rachel’s pure horror on her face.

76 OJ

“Well that was a refreshing swim”

77 RACHEL “your face!”

78 OJ

“is beautiful I know”

79 RACHEL “your tail?!”

80 OJ

“is also beau-...please tell me

you didn’t just say tail”

OJ nervously looks behind him to see a wagging monkey tail, he then faints at the mere sight.

81 RACHEL

“tails are soooo weird!”

Rachel scoots away slightly from OJ’s unconscious body. several hours go by and OJ is still unconscious and Rachel

is looking rather bored in her corner, she then looks at

OJ with a sad but thanking smile.

suddenly Rachel hears a loud explosion further down the corridor, she perks up and moves closer to OJ’s body, then the door slowly opens, Rachel starts to shake with fear, but then sudden;y stops when she realizes its not the man in the white cloak, but rather a tall muscular heavily armed man in a completely black suit with only the eyes holes showing part of his face.

the armed man grabs OJ and starts to walk towards the door

82 RACHEL

“what do you think your doing?!”

83 AGENT NINE “come, we are escaping”

agent nine then walks out the door and down the corridor with OJ on his shoulder, he then starts to sprint as the other side of the corridor starts to explode, Rachel then gets up quickly and starts to follow nine

84 RACHEL “anywhere but here...”

ZERO LAB COURTYARD EXT MIDNIGHT

the three then just about escape the building before it fully starts to collapse, they then start to head for the chopper just a few meters from the building however Rachel hears something, turns and looks up at the sky as from the distance a ship fly’s clear past. however as it does another object comes closer into view and starts to descend rapidly towards Rachel’s position, she jumps out the way as a drop pod lands just after she moves.

The landing of the pod alerts nine as he puts OJ’s body down in the ship and he rushes back outside infront of Rachel. the drop pod door then gets kicked open by SGT Joe holding his signature Shot-Sword, the two stare at each other for a moment before Joe slowly looks up at the burning building, rage builds in his eyes, more rage than a broken building deserves, the sight confuses Rachel slightly but nine stands strong.

85 AGENT NINE

“The legendary Sargent Joe, What would a important man, (Nine corrects himself) Monster like yourself be doing at a unimportant lab raid like this?”

Joe does not reply, but instead cocks his shotsword.

nine then launches off to attack but Joe counters and the two begin to spar it out over the courtyard while Rachel moves slowly back to the chopper.

Nine and Joe continue to fight as the lab in the background continues to collapse, Joe, constantly switching his shotsword from one mode to the other to counter nine’s incredibly fast strikes with his knuckle knives.

Joe gets knocked back by nine with a vital hit to his shoulder and then knocks him back a couple feet, Joe then charges at nine, fires a shotgun shell, immediately splits the gun into two, fires two more rounds and switches his gun to sword mode as two blades come out and Joe’s swings for nine, nine back flips to safety but Joe powers up by using his primation power and suddenly becomes engulfed in electricity, nines eyes become more focused however suddenly Joe zaps behind nine and gives him a finishing blow to the back, Joe then stands over nine, cocks his shotsword ready to kill but pauses.

nine looks at Joe almost confused at his pause but then Joe suddenly collapses to the side, in Joe’s place nine see’s Rachel standing a way behind him holding a stun rifle.

86 RACHEL “lets go!”

nine then gets up, looks at Joe’s paralyzed body, and decides to pick him up and bring him onboard

87 RACHEL

“are you crazy? I do hope your just going to behead him onboard and keep it for your mantelpiece”

88 AGENT NINE

“He is a valuable prisoner”

Nine then walks off towards the ship with a frustrated

Rachel behind him.

89 RACHEL

“More like a dangerous prisoner”- Rachel mumbles to herself

CHOPPER INT MIDNIGHT

The group then board the plane, Rachel looks down to see OJ barely conscious, he saw the whole thing, he smiles back at Rachel as she looks at him before he returns to sleep.

As they take off Rachel sits down in the secondary pilot seat.

90 RACHEL

“So are you part of my dad’s elite unit? are you taking us home?”

Nine remains silent.

91 RACHEL “Hey!”

92 AGENT NINE

“If you go home now they will only take you again, along with whoever else you are with...or they might just kill them.”

Rachel is silent for a moment

93 RACHEL

“your not one of daddy’s unit then... where are taking us?"

94 AGENT NINE “Prime-Sapien Isles”

95 RACHEL

“The home of the monsters that killed the Zero Queen?!”

Nine looks at Rachel in the corner of his eyes with a look that pierces through her soul. Rachel realizes her mistakes as she catches a glimpse of nines arms which are covered in fur,she realizes he is a Prime-sapien too.

The camera then shifts to the back where OJ awakens to see a constrained Joe opposite him, staring sadly at the floor. The camera then shifts to the back of the chopper with a view of everyone and then pans outside as the choppers engages its jet mode and bolts into the horizon.

(Roll Credits.)

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