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An artificial Intelligence, “Shenn”, is running the world and people are extremely fearful of these mysterious entities who they know or at least suspect run their affairs. The earth has been split into various lands which were created supposedly as a social experiment on a vast scale to see in which type of society humans can be happiest without continuing to place their planet and their survival at risk. In reality each land has a form of control: poverty, social media, religion... Travel between the lands is strictly forbidden and the differences between them ("The Variance") are upheld rigidly. In this first part of the series we follow Baronne, who has been banished to cold, harsh Skandia. He meets the militant Ragga and revolts are initiated against the poverty of Skandia and the social media Konsensus in Lakeura.

Scifi / Adventure
Steve Morgan
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The Banishee

Baronne was unceremoniously thrust out through the steel door into the cold, crisp air and he stumbled, tumbling down the rocky slope until he finally came to rest, his shoulder smashing painfully into a large and unfortunately angular boulder. He pulled his aching body away from the boulder and used his legs to push against it to give himself some space. Resting his head back against the rough ground, he looked up at the sky of his new land. It was a clear, moonlit night; the moon was large and full and away from its looming presence he could make out dozens of stars, perhaps hundreds, some moving, most still. He had never seen such a beautiful night sky. In his homeland the ever-present neon would have overwhelmed those stars and the tall buildings would have restricted the panorama. It was the same moon he had seen throughout his life, the same sky but it was unnervingly different and despite its evident beauty it was a frightening reminder that he was now far from Lakeura. He felt thoroughly dejected and miserable. He was far from his friends and family, far from familiarity and comfort. He sat upright and satisfied himself that he had received no serious injuries, checking his tender shoulder, then running his hands up and down his sore and aching legs. He pushed himself up slowly from the ground, grimacing at his stiff muscles and knees and looked around. His immediate surroundings seemed totally black, despite the moonlight, and he could make out no discernible pathway to follow. He looked back up the slope. The now closed doorway was built into the base of a high, steep cliff face and was mostly hidden from view by thick undergrowth. He tried to note the exact location, to instil any visible landmarks into his memory. Any ideas he may have had about ever returning through that door were foolish but that thought, that hope, was all he had left. His eyes slowly began to adjust to the darkness. Above him and far over to his right was an enormous concrete structure embedded in the steep hillside; some kind of dam. He had an irrational desire to stay closer to the south. Closer to Lakeura. But that would mean scaling the high cliffs and scree-laden slopes which were surrounding him on three sides. His way back towards home was closed off to him physically as well as politically. His only option was to walk in the other direction, down the hill to the north east. He tried to convince himself that it made no difference. Staying a few miles closer to his homeland was futile. It was simply a meaningless psychological comfort. He would never be able to return.

In the distance below, he could make out the faint, ember glows of a city. It was no doubt Skandia City, his new home. Nizza would have stood out in stark contrast to the surrounding countryside. Its lights would have been ablaze, warm and bright even from this distance. Skandia was barely visible. The pitifully dull lighting was a grim foresight of his future life. It was cold here, bitterly cold in the dark and the clothes he was wearing were more suited to the warmer climes of his former homeland. He shivered, braced himself and began to move warily downwards in the direction of those unappealing lights, hoping the ground ahead of him was clear. It was too cold to wait for better light. He needed to move, to keep warm but also to have something to occupy his thoughts other than his banishment and his misery.

He walked for what must have been three or four hours, picking his way carefully down through the darkness, his way ahead slowly easing as dawn approached. He desperately hoped that the days would prove to be far warmer than the nights in this unfamiliar region. He was not used to hardship or physical discomfort. He was already beginning to have doubts about his ability to survive here in this unwelcoming climate. Those dim lights of the city were closer now, perhaps only a further two or three hours away. He kept moving forwards, still choosing his way carefully over the rough terrain and finally came to a road. It was hardly a road by Lakeuran standards but it at least afforded him some relatively hard and smooth ground and he was able to pick up his pace a little, confident that he would not fall and injure himself further. Off the road to the right and a few hundred meters in front of him in a copse, a small, flickering light came into view. As he approached closer he could make out a small fire and could hear several muffled voices. He started to feel anxious. He wondered if he should leave the road and return to the rougher terrain to the left, bypassing any possible danger of an encounter with strangers. He would need work, so he would have to approach people eventually but he had heard worrying tales about his new region, especially about how unwelcoming to new arrivals they could be. The people here were poor and work was notoriously hard to find. He was a banishee, and wore the red stripe of the banishee along his forehead just above the eye line. He imagined there would be a particular loathing for his kind. A contempt for someone who had not made the most of being born in an easier land, for someone who was perhaps even a criminal. He hesitated, unsure of what to do. Maybe on his first night here he was better off giving these people a wide berth and continuing into the city where the light and witnesses would deter any potential aggression. He should be very careful, remain safe until he knew and understood the people of Skandia a little more. But then again these might be precisely the sort of people who could help him find work and might be less worried about his dubious and shameful provenance. After all, why were they here, outside the city, gathered around a small fire in the night? Perhaps they were like him, outcasts with whom he might find some form of kinship. He gathered his courage and walked slowly and warily towards those low, whispered voices. He thought it best to announce his presence well in advance rather than surprising them close up, so he called out from some distance.

‘Hello? Is there anyone there?’ There was no reply, but encouragingly there were no startled movements either and no sign of any physical threat. ‘Hello? Is it okay for me to approach?’

He continued to ease his way through the trees and slowly entered the small clearing where a group of half a dozen men were sitting on the ground around the fire. An old, beaten and blackened metal pan was hung over the flames boiling water and each one of them held a steaming and equally beaten tin mug in both hands to warm them. They wore nothing more than rags but in abundant layers with every inch of skin well covered except their fingertips and faces. None of them moved, those facing away from him made no effort to turn to see who was entering their small camp.

‘Would it be alright if I warmed myself up a little by your fire? I have been walking all night, and as you can probably see I am not really prepared and dressed for the cold of your region.’

One of the group looked up at the young man who had approached them and Baronne saw the immediate flicker of distaste in his eyes as he noticed the red mark indicating his new lowly status. Is this how it would be everywhere here? How would he ever be accepted as an equal in his new home? The man staring at him looked old, certainly much older than the others in the group. Saying nothing, he finally motioned to the ground next to him.

‘Thank you, sir. My name is Baronne. I am new to Skandia.’ There was still no response from anyone, other than a barely perceptible nod of acknowledgement from the same old man. In the light of the fire Baronne became even more aware of the stark, red mark across his face. He was feeling embarrassed and ashamed but he knew this was something he would have to get used to. He would need to accept his status quickly and overcome any feelings of shame and humiliation. He was now very conscious not only of his red line but also his accent. The people here spoke the same language as he did but the accent was very different. He had met people from Skandia before, in his homeland of Lakeura. He had even come across several relocs – fortunate people who had been chosen for relocation from a lower land. They spoke in an odd, slow manner which people in Lakeura would often mock. He tried speaking with them again. ‘I’m looking for work. Would any of you gentlemen know of anything? I’m a hard worker and a quick learner.’

The old man took a sip of his hot drink and sniffed, rubbing the sleeve of his worn, brown overcoat across his nose. He coughed and spat something from his mouth. ‘Everyone in this place is a hard worker. Everyone here has to be a fast learner.’ That strange, slow Skandia drawl. It was more extreme coming from this old man’s mouth than he had heard before from his limited encounters with those young relocs. The accent was even more pronounced than he had feared. He would be even more different here than he had feared.

‘Do you know of anything at all, sir? May I ask your name?’

‘There is nothing for you here. Go to the city. People like you would not be interested in anything we have here. Not at the beginning anyway.’ For the first time this elicited a response from the others as he heard several amused grunts from around the camp fire.

Baronne felt disappointed but relieved at the same time. Disappointed that his initial bravery had brought no rewards but relieved that at least he had not been attacked. He pondered what the old man had insinuated. He was not ready for anything illegal yet, if that was indeed what he meant. He could not risk any further banishment. He had known of Skandia before being sent here. He knew that it was a harsh place, a poor place. Nobody knew for certain of any land lower. If there were a lower region, then nobody had ever returned from it to tell the tale. There were myths and legends, horror stories and children’s tales but nobody knew for certain. Whatever these people camped here outside the city did to earn a living he did not want anything to do with it. Or as the old man had said: at least not yet. He stayed for a further few minutes in silence, as long as he could before it became too awkward, then thanked them and stood up to continue his journey into the city of Skandia.

It was much lighter now and as he got closer to the city the road became smoother and wider. The rough, rocky terrain at the beginning of his walk had now given way to lush, rolling, green farmland and he could already see men and women working in the fields. Skandia was an agricultural land. Its produce was sent to many other surrounding regions and life here was notoriously hard and physically demanding for its inhabitants. Any work would be punishing on his body. There would be little demand for his skill set. Luckily he was young, strong and fit. He would surely soon become accustomed to the harsh physicality of any work. He could see an impressively wide river in the distance, running parallel with him, no doubt flowing from the mountains and the dam behind him and irrigating the fields now surrounding him. The river was so wide that he could barely make out its opposite bank. He was hungry but exhaustion was now beginning to overwhelm even his hunger. He desperately needed some sleep. Just a few hours would do before he entered the city itself. He turned off the road along a narrow track, searching for somewhere quiet and sheltered. When he found a suitable spot, on the edge of what appeared to be an orchard, he collapsed onto the soft, long grass and fell asleep within minutes.

When he woke, the sun was much higher and he could feel its warm, welcoming glow on his face. A small stream was running just below the stretch of long grass which had formed his bed and he scrambled down to it and drank a few handfuls of water, splashing some over his face and neck. The orchard on the other side of the stream was filled with apple trees and he looked around, listening for any signs of a worker or passer by who might be watching. He was frightened but he was starving, so he quickly ran to grab a couple of apples and returned to hide in the long grass. He greedily and furtively devoured the two still sour apples before walking back towards the road and turning left to continue his long and lonely march into the city.

The fields were now filled with busy workers, hunched over silently, picking produce. What it might be, Baronne had no idea. His ignorance worried him. How would he find work ahead of any local who would know far more that he did about farming? Occasional wagons passed by on the road, drawn by emaciated, miserable looking horses, the drivers offering no acknowledgement of his presence whatsoever. As he entered the outskirts of Skandia, he was shocked to see the dusty, potholed streets and the flimsy, wooden buildings. No mechanical transport was visible, there was none of the bright, neon lighting he was used to back in his home city. There was no noise, no music, none of the all pervasive ads which used to annoy him so. He would give anything right now to be pestered by one of those gaudy advertisers pushing some kind of superficial nonsense. It was as if he had travelled back in time hundreds of years. The workers were dressed in rags no better than those worn by the group of men he had seen overnight by the camp fire. Nobody smiled, nobody laughed. They seemed to go about their day as if in a daze, with enough energy to complete their work but little else.

He walked on. The houses seemed to become a little more substantial, some even brick built. He noticed a glass-fronted building, all of three stories high with an elaborate, decorative balcony surrounding the top floor. Written above the entrance door was “Overseer”. Several wagons were parked outside it, the horses taking the welcome opportunity to take a drink from a trough. People were entering and leaving, so Baronne approached the building and walked hesitantly inside, hoping that this might be a good place to begin his day’s search for work. A small queue of men and women were ahead of him. The women were dressed in exactly the same manner as the men, rags of mostly brown and grey cloth. They were queuing at a counter which was manned by a male, probably in his thirties, who looked very different from those he had seen thus far. This man looked healthy, with a lean, wiry and fairly muscular build. He was dressed in a bright, electric-blue jacket with an immaculately white shirt underneath. His trousers and expensive looking shoes were as pure a white as the shirt. He was smiling and passing coin cards back to those in the queue, who took their payments with sad, exaggerated sighs before turning to leave the room, muttering quietly to themselves. When the man in the blue jacket had paid the last of them he turned his attention to Baronne and the bright, white smile immediately dissipated as he took in the new arrival’s face and the thick red line across his forehead.

‘Hello’, said Baronne as enthusiastically as he could after his miserable and exhausting night. ‘My name is Baronne. I was wondering if you perhaps had any work, or knew of anyone who might need some help in return for food and shelter.’

‘What work do you do?’ asked the overseer, a rather forced smile returning reluctantly to his face as he mustered an attempt at friendliness.

‘I design systems,’ replied Baronne, sheepishly. ‘I know you may not have much call here for that sort of thing but I...’

‘We have no call for such things at all around here. Come closer, over here. Let me see your hands.’

Baronne approached the man and sheepishly held out his hands. They were smooth, soft and unmarked. He felt himself blush again with that already familiar sense of humiliation and embarrassment. ‘I know what you are thinking, but I really am a hard worker and I am prepared to do anything that would be required of me. I am not frightened or daunted by physical work. I am very fit, really I am.’

A woman appeared through a doorway behind the overseer. She was dressed even more ostentatiously than the man, in a long, bright red dress with what seemed to be blue and green feathers running in a shimmering line diagonally from shoulder to waist. She looked at Baronne, taking in his tall and muscular frame from top to bottom and giving him a huge, admiring, white smile.

‘Does he know anything about gardening?’ she asked, not taking her eyes from him but apparently reluctant to speak to him directly. ‘We could always use a little help at the river house, couldn’t we?’

‘No, we couldn’t,’ replied the overseer, looking back over his shoulder at the woman reproachfully. His attempt at being polite and welcoming had now petered out after his wife’s unhelpful intervention. ‘He’s never done a day’s manual labour in his life.’ He returned his gaze to Baronne. He seemed temporarily embarrassed by his little outburst and made another obvious effort to regain his composure. The bright, white smile reappeared. ‘We don’t have anything for you here. Not right now. I’m sorry but you should leave.’ He held out his hand towards the door and looked down at a slip of paper on the desk in front of him, feigning immense interest in its contents.

Baronne nodded sadly, thanked the overseer for his time and walked back out into the sunshine. He looked up and down the dusty street and wondered what on earth he should do next. He began to think back to his days in his own homeland and the spoiled, wasted life he had led there. He saw himself back in his family home and bitterly regretted what he had done. He had been foolish and selfish. Now this was the result. Any faint optimism he had felt upon entering the city after his long trek overnight had now disappeared. He was alone, unhappy, unwanted and helpless.

He wondered if he should continue into the city centre or retrace his steps back out into the countryside. He just didn’t know where the chances of work might be better. As he stood there trying to decide he saw a large convoy of wagons approaching, each fully loaded with green produce. It was huge, there must have been a hundred of the small, horse drawn wagons, each driven by one rag-clad man or woman. The convoy was producing huge clouds of dust as it passed by. Assuming that it must be on its way to some kind of processing or packing plant and hoping that perhaps there may be some kind of work available there, Baronne seized his chance and jumped aboard one of the final wagons, the dust thankfully hiding him from view. He lay in the back of the wagon and buried himself as far as possible into a huge pile of freshly picked lettuces. After ten minutes or so the convoy started to slow down and he slid out from his cover and off the wagon down onto the road. The wagons were entering an enormous factory or warehouse building. An entrance door had slid upwards like a giant mouth to devour the long, snaking convoy of lettuce. He was standing in a yard, busy with people hurrying to and fro, not talking, concentrated on getting to where they needed to be and the urgent task which no doubt awaited them when they arrived. He tried to stop some of them but was completely and rudely ignored. He walked alongside some of them, merely trying to ask them politely if they knew of anywhere he could ask for work. Most didn’t even look in his direction. Those who did saw the red line and hurried on, a look of hateful disdain on their faces. Eventually he began to walk alongside one elderly man who actually seemed to smile at him but still had to hurry to keep up despite the man’s apparent age.

‘Is this a packing plant for the lettuce?’ he asked, smiling as politely as he possibly could back at the old man.

‘It is,’ replied the old man, breathlessly. ‘Cleaning, packing, processing, cutting, everything.’

‘Are there many such places in Skandia? Do you know if they are looking for new workers at any of them?’

The old man slowed down and looked sideways at Baronne, and the banishee once again saw that same look in the eye as the red mark gave away his shame.

‘There are many places like this but not as many as in the old days. We had everything back then, there was work for everybody. Now look around you. People are desperate for work, desperate to hold onto work, afraid of making a mistake or being late. There are more people than jobs and the overseers know it. I wish you luck, but we all have to look out for ourselves and our families here.’ He stopped walking and turned to face Baronne. He was once again looking at the red line and then looked directly into Baronne’s eyes, almost sympathetically, or so the banishee felt. ‘You will not be popular if you get a job. You will be resented if you get anything or anywhere ahead of those who are born and bred here. It’s just the way it is. I’m sorry. I’m really sorry. I would like to help you, I remember the days when people took pride in welcoming strangers, when people were good. Those days are long gone. You are on your own now.’

He walked away, even quicker than before but Baronne persisted and kept pace with him. What other choice did he have? If he didn’t persist with this one person who seemed to take an interest, he might starve to death in this place. ‘Where would I go to see if there is work here? Please, I’m prepared to do anything.’

‘You have no chance! I’ve just told you! They have been cutting labour lately. There is still the same amount of work to do but they always expect fewer workers to do it. They are laying people off, not taking on. Please, I have to go. The office is over there, behind you on the left. The blue door. Blue is for overseer. Blue is official.’

‘Thank you, sir. What is your name?’

‘My name? You want to know my name?’

‘Of course. Is that not normal here?’

The old man stopped, looking puzzled. ‘Steyna. My name is Steyna.’ Then he hurried off, afraid, it would seem, of being late to complete whatever task was awaiting him.

‘Thank you Steyna!’ shouted Baronne. He received no acknowledgement in return. The old man simply turned his head slightly sideways as if he had heard something strange in the distance.

Baronne walked over to the shabby, blue door that the man had pointed to and walked boldly inside. A middle aged man was standing at a counter, dressed in dazzling blue and white, exactly as the previous overseer had been. Behind him was an entrance directly into the packing factory floor. The background noise of hard manual labour was very evident. He could hear no modern machinery, just the thump of heavy bags, the rattle of chains and the shouts of stressed workers. The overseer gave him a wide grin, his ridiculously bright white teeth flashing. His eyes weren’t smiling. He had noticed the red line just as they all had.

‘How can I help you today?’ beamed the overseer jovially, brushing an annoying speck of dust from the arm of his electric-blue jacket.

‘I’m looking for work. Any work. I have just arrived in Skandia. Just last night, actually and I need something, anything to earn a living here. I can work hard and I can learn fast. I know you may think I am unworthy because of this,’ said Baronne, indicating his banishee mark, ‘but if you could just let me take up some of your time to explain...’

‘No need to explain anything,’ interrupted the overseer, holding up his right hand, the bright, white grin not wavering for an instant. ‘We all believe in second chances here. Your mark indicates a new beginning, that’s all. Forgive and forget, I say. Unfortunately though, we are not taking on any new workers at the moment. I’m so sorry.’ The overseer registered the desperate disappointment which invaded Baronne’s demeanour, a demeanour which had seemed so hopeful until then. He momentarily seemed uncomfortable and troubled. The bright, white smile flickered briefly. He leant his head to the side, looking at Baronne as one might to a small child as you finally gave way to a persistent demand for a treat. ‘Look into that lens behind me,’ he said. Baronne heard a small click as his photograph was taken. ‘Take a card,’ the overseer added, swiping a small, blue, rectangular strip of plastic through some kind of electronic device on a table behind him. ‘If anything comes up in any of the processing plants, this card will inform you and let you know where to report. Work in the fields is handled by a different office. You would need to go to Pavillon 3. Blue door, close to the entrance. Can’t miss it. Anyone will show you the way.’ He flashed his whitest smile again and returned to the electronic device behind him, tapping in some information. He was, no doubt, informing the system of the banishee mark and noting his unsuitability for any meaningful work, thought Baronne miserably.

‘Thank you. Where exactly is Pavillon 3? Is it far from here?’

The overseer, evidently very proud of his helpfulness, patience and kindness, reached below the counter, opened a drawer, searched for a while and took out a map. He unfolded it carefully and pressed it down flat on the top of the counter.

‘We are here,’ he said, indicating a point on the map around halfway into the centre of the city. ‘Pavillon 3 is here.’ It seemed to be back from where he had come, a little to the east of where he would have entered the outskirts. ‘If you can get anywhere close to it, ask anyone for directions. Everyone will know it. Simple, really.’

Baronne thanked him profusely for his help and left the building. He walked back across the yard and out of the factory gates. Looking back, he could see that the huge, imposing mouth of the factory was still greedily swallowing the produce of the land. Another, equally huge door across to the left was regurgitating hundreds of workers. Perhaps a change of shift, thought the new arrival. He wondered if he would at some stage in the future be accepted and swallowed by this new land or ruthlessly spat out and rejected. At this moment neither option seemed very appealing to him.

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