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The Valkyrie Chronicles: To The Stars

By mmulhollon All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Scifi

Chapter 1

Once the Challenger left Federation territory they encountered a star system that was in their path and scanned the system to find no habitable planets and the science division would later label it the Xendi Sabu system. They later made contact with the inhabitants on Azel and Arbazan before the Challenger reached orbit to a planet in the Alterac system. Gross, Crow and two security personal materialized on the surface and Gross activated her scanner and said, “They are this way.”, and they walked up a rocky hill and Crow said, “I hope these people are as friendly as the last two we encountered.”, Gross said, “I’m sure they are. They came from another system as well.”, Crow said, “Then explain to me why our ship is orbiting the other side of the planet and keeping our distance from them?”, Gross pointed and said, “There!”, and they looked to see a few people wearing suits making their way towards them and Gross called out, “My name is Commander Gross from the starship Challenger representing the Zhargosia Republic!”, four suited people came up to them and one of them said, “We represent the Breen Confederacy. Come with us, now.”, Gross said, “Are you demanding us to come or inviting?”, Gross looked down and saw the Breen had their rifles down but were ready to bring them up and the Breen soldier said, “We insist.”, and Gross said, “Well why didn’t you say so!”, Breen soldier said, “Hand over your weapons.”, and Gross grabbed her phaser as she slipped a finger behind the holster and pressed a hidden button and she started handing over her phaser till all of a sudden she and the landing party dematerialized as the Breen fired their phaser rifles at them but to no avail as the beams passed through them. Michael sat and watched the main viewer on the bridge waiting for the away team to report as Chloe assumed the science station and she said, “I still don’t get why Trunks and Gohan didn’t want to come.”, Michael said, “They have problems at home they need to settle, but Gohan...”, Helm said, “Sir that ship is moving towards us, and are arming weapons!”, Tu, “Sir I’m also receiving a transmission from them directing at us!”, Michael said, “Shields up! Put them on main viewer!”, the view screen then showed a masked face in a form of a gas mask with a green visor said, “This is Ga’tor of the Breen warship Shitora. Lower your shields and prepare to be boarded.”, Michael said, “This is Captain Valkyrie of the starship Challenger. We are on a mission of peace. If you wish us to leave...”, Chu (navigation) said, “Sir they’re...”, the ship shook hard as everyone held to their stations and Ga’tor said, “Lower shields now!”, Michael said, “Over my dead body!”, Michael looked at Tu and waved his hand in a sigh to cut off communications and the view screen changed to show the Breen warship in front of them in the distance and approaching as Michael said, “Fire torpedos!”, Chu pressed a button and two torpedo fired and hit the center of the Breen warship and before their eyes they watched as the ship exploded.

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