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Devil has risen

By XavierLeeAuthor All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Thriller

Devil has risen

 Oxygen detoxifying every living creature, the blooded sky surrounding the already weaken- releasing its deadly purified gas Seaping   through every air-way , the Eary nature of the inhabitants their eyes turning a pale red in colour slowly deepening, The road once paved in metallic grey -now  crystals of stars fallen ,the wind  so chilling, whistling crystals above the ground in a trail .Earth's greenery flourished , flourishing soil once mother nature is no more. A grave unmarked , pouring a Earyness of such evil still emits from the earths core , core itself shaking with enough force to dismantle a large mass object ."Fear is the mind of knowing what's  to happen , fear is  weak minded "                                   Laid in torment for Century's beneath his once kingdom fraught with evilness - he will soon rise again .

                                                          Chapter One                                                          The air thickening more than usual sends a crying whisper of stagnant, slightly delayed harsh breathing ,plantation surrounding the once flourishing earth clambers for oxygen to sustain its form within its labyrinth Seap's to its holy grail -while across the  the old Trent bridge  , whispered Crys are more heard within the catacomb of the dark .Within the catacomb of darkness the sky turns red , blooded sky surrounds the already weak-releases its deadly purified gas Seaping through every Air-way  nature of the once living eyes turning a pale red in colour slowly deepens  , road once paved in metallic grey now lite up with crystal  stars fallen, the wind so chilling sends whispering crystals above the ground in a trail "Earth's greenery once flourished, flourishing soil once mother nature no more " the trail itself winding near to an unmarked grave in the City of Rock Cemetery  Seaps such an Earyness of  evilness begins to shake the grounds core signaling fear,a crack so Pertruding  leaves the graphite stone balancing on its thinnest edges . earthly tomb breaking as dormant air flows out seeking  for pure matter . The lost name on the  tombstone " Apollyon  " ,The lost tyrant soon to be reborn . 
                                                           Soon to Commence 
Apollyon  the "Beast" is a perfection of evil born  8,000 years ago in a time where no rules applied , where his time  ended abruptly cast out by those who felt threatened in a time that's far past his waiting time, he now rises . 
In a world that has far adapted from his time he will himself adapt to his surroundings , manipulating every living plasm with intense evil that Seaps through their veins changing their structure along with it ,Moving beneath the ground slowly rising is the earths flowing blood toward's its destiny giving off pure heat . Apollyon re-creation is at hand 8,000 years of perfection reinstated to all its glory but- Stronger , faster and more mass evil .
                                                                                                72 hours Later
  Earth's crust opens , burning pure red flames around the cast steel iron tomb that opens with a freeing wind of diminished air that has turned into dust, in the mist of it the "Beast" Rises  out of his catacomb of darkness , Every step leaves a flame print leaving a trail behind .A gust of wind opens an  ancient Cast iron gate surrounded by smoky fog from which stained the gate for a century and a half . The past remnant of fingerprints blows off with tints of red as in the background a burning trail burn the night as the figure of you know who walks.Upon approaching the gate,  across from him he sees a shop for sustenance and proceeds to enter . once inside he asks for the meat section from the assistant "straight down the isle on your left, Apollyon " looks at him then walks . Knowing he has not   eaten for century's but to sustain his hunger he grabs what meat he can , heading out of the shop he's stopped in his tracks by the owner (late fifty's , Vietnam  veteran a tough guy in his day but thinks he's his former self) who Isn't happy about finding out he has a customer unwilling to pay decides to take things into his own hands unaware of his dwindling fate while pursuing this violent act of heroism .The owner "Dajan ... goes to grab The none paying customer to  throw him out but he struggles to even move him just an inch , out the corner of his eye he picks up the baseball bat  that was leaning against the counter side wall . With a fierce swipe of the bat he hits him on his chest , a jagged crack appears along the length of the aforementioned weapon , Silence ...then a flash of movement from Apollyon as he grabs Dajan  around the choker (throat ) slowly lifting him off the ground pressuring his larynx as he gets higher off the floor . Gasps of air weakening struggling to get loose Ordan    The Assistant say's out loud, "..Just take it!"with a deep glare in his eyes , forcefully throwing the owner onto the ground he walks out leaving a trail of footsteps Inprinted in the concrete ...Back at his home of hell he lays a rest eating for Sustainence ,after a few hours consuming enough meat to last he then retires to his place of rest  for needed sleep. Next Morrow rising up needing clothes befitting ,retracing the  Inprints in the concrete he made looking far a head with piercing eyes ...unknowingly Ordan comes out of the shop as its bin collection day and not noticing who's coming up behind 'he looks up to the sky thinking he heard a common pigeon bird Squarking  ', sea of pure red mist encases above Apollyon moves up behind jeff standing there praying on him -noticing some rubbish has fallen out the bin reaching to pick it up a shadow catches the eye slowly throwing rubbish he turns a round rather shaken ,turning fully looking up those red eyes Piercing  through him seeing the door still open he runs for the safety of the shop ...Locks and bolts the main and back door,he sighs a relief cut short by laughter Entwind  with terror ...enhanced with more laughter  more intense ,evil echoing from down-stairs near the back entrance , Laughter becoming more intensified as darkness Incaptulates its surroundings forming a Claustrophobic feeling .                                                 That feeling of someone knowing where you are,sensing your every move  inescapable .  That...feeling... Seaps fear into his eyes drawing moisture from his Scrawny skin  Heaving a scent of pure incandescent gas . His senses going frantic,constantly looking everywhere around him ..starting to mutter " w...w...what do you want... who are you ",shouted petrifiedly   "said Ordan !"" Είμαι ο χειρότερος εφιάλτης σας !" ...( I am your worst nightmare) !"  Having stayed up most of the night he scurries away to his make-shift bed and pulls the cover over his shaking body .6   am rolls around ....keys Jangling . lock turning 
 jeff "...rushes out towards the jarred door trying to force it shut !"Dajan"...what the fuck ordan ," it's me let me in !" SORRY I'VE HAD A TERRIBLE NIGHT !.", you look like  shit "... clean y' self up Here y'go "Whisky ? ," im fine ", TAKE IT ! " ...Lookin nervious..petrified to the touch he carry's on keeping his mind frantically busy while veteran eyes keep watch !. 
This Earth so pitiful , a waste of humananity , wrath of my vengeance is upon them                                              Apollyon - 
                         Thus far nothing exceedingly evil has happened ?

     On the weather it forecasted gushing rain ,Gayle force winds . Dajan " They're always saying that, they never get it right ...STUPID TWATS ! Later on that morning, the delivery turned up to stock the shelves and the driver was instructed to go round the back for offloading the goods .While remaining out back directing where to lay the groceries , ordan still traumatised, potters about lazely and unbewildering from the on-lookers outside in the yard pearing  through a small but yet manageble stained glass effect window . Signing off on the deliveries Dajan returns inside not to startle him but with a soft yet hardened voice he natters " This is about that guy""No" says ordanTaking the trash out an echo arises out of the cold evening shuttering a chill of terror as ordan still in shock and scared lowers the trash bin lid down whilst looking behind him . Just a silent whisper is enough to make him scurry back inside latching locks quickly , while behind him dajan pears over him from afar slowly shaking his head - meanwhile counting today's takings ( £1000) adding the sum total to £11,500,69 pence  he stacks it in his 1.5 tone vault hidden behind his beloved watercolour .Once done hanging the picture back on the wall he walks over to the till and refills with coins . 1ps ,2ps ,5ps and so forth ready for an early start tomorrow  . Getting ready... phone rings - immediately answers it , " Hello " says  ordan (Static) thats strange - maybe he'll try again - or i will make the  call .Moments later phone rings... "Hello ? " says ordan , " ordan it's me dajan said  ,can you meet me at the shop in fifteen minutes? Yes sure says ordan ,"good. I'm headed straight there now says dajan " !. 
   Discovering what will  happen - unleashing its own destructive forces to all humans for eternity, that is inevitable... you cant denie the very fate that will lay upon you .

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