Murky Waters Rising

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Crime thriller meets erotica in this story of four young Navy Female Sailors. Lace, Jen, Nika and Sasha are from different walks of life, but grew up together during their time in the Navy and became the best of friends. They became the family to one another that they left behind. They comforted one another through heartbreaks and pain; protected one another at all cost, by taking matters into their own hands to ensure future heartbreak and pain were avoided. They plotted the ultimate acts of revenge. Tragedy struck, and they were left to wonder if their bad deeds outweighed the good.

Thriller / Erotica
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# MLK Weekend 2003

I was getting ready to leave Sasha’s when Lace insisted on staying over with me. We packed the kids up, and Nika packed up DD, and we all left Sasha’s at the same time. I tried calling Axel on the way in to see if he needed anything while I was out, but he didn’t answer. I pulled into my parking spot, and Lace pulled in right next to me. I was ready to get into the house and hang with my man for a bit. I really wished Lace had stayed at Sasha’s. I wanted alone time with Axel.

“Hold on!” Lace yelled as I was about to enter the house.

“Can you give me a hand?” she asked. I walked back over to her car and grabbed T’s bag. Her hands weren’t full; she didn’t need the help. We walked to the door laughing about a story Sasha shared with us earlier that day. I opened the door and walked in. I heard Lace scream before I saw anything.

“Alisha, T,” she yelled, “come with me!” she said as she ushered the kids out the house. I stood there in disbelief. Axel was laid out on the floor. I ran over to Axel and attempted CPR, but it was too late. He was gone. I could tell he was dead by the dried-up foam that had come out of his mouth, and he had no pulse. I don’t remember screaming any, but I do remember crying and crying hysterically. Lace called 911 and must have called Nika and Sasha right after. They arrived within minutes of the cops arriving.

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Deanna Taylor: This book is a good one, would be a little better if it were longer. Writing style is good good story line. Keep up the good work.

DADIRAYI: I really enjoyed reading this book. Very interesting though there is too much sex. Will recommend it to my friends who really love such novels.

Nichole Salaices: I like the story so far. The punishments this man does omg 🔥

Martha Stuart: I honestly loved this story so much but wish there was more

Y2KVixen2K: Wayment! THAT’S IT???!!! I need more!!! You can’t stop right when it’s getting good!! PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!!!

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Elzett Lenting: Wow, really enjoying this book so far. You are doing a wonderful job telling a storyGreat writing, would like to read your other work

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lovelyytayylor: Loved reading this. Thanks!

Laurie: A little marred by typos and grammar, this could use a proof-reader. There were a couple of words that don’t mean what you think they mean.The story is great. The scenes are well done and the dialog isn’t cringey. (Don’t start getting “olde timey” fake medieval” - there was a hint of it a couple ...

VielUnvieled: I love this already please update, I cant wait to read more

Jules27: What a sweet story, I’m glad Chloe had a lovely story. Can’t wait to read Davidson’s story now

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