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"You ugly shithead, you disgust me". Was all I could say to myself as my new found friends walked away from me. Welcome to a constant war between a 16 year old girl and her raging mind. A society that doesn't give a shit and a body that wouldn't fit the social standards no matter how hard she tries.

Thriller / Mystery
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Chapter one.

"Ring, ring, ring!". l know some of you might actually think that was an alarm clock, very sorry to burst your bubbles but that was just me. My name is vanessa, a chubby, short haired, weirdly dressed and acne covered 16 year old.

A girl who would do anything to feel loved and beautiful, a girl who has been hurt multiple times by the opposite sex. Mocked and violated every time she walks down the hall, a girl who always feels the pangs of jealousy when a slim girl passes by.

It got so bad the only words she remembers are "freak, creep, you make me want to puke " as tears make a stream on both sides of her face. Well it's all too late now.

You people hurt me, destroyed me, and landed my mum in the hospital. This letter is just to notify you that " I'm coming for you and believe me you shall feel my pain". And just as I finished reading the message on my phone the school alarm went off. "Code red, shoot-"and everything went black.

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lbs213: Good story line moving on to the next one!

Cara Kempton: It is great so far! I absolutely love it!

Teri Miltenberger: Excellent. I really enjoy your books. Lots of mistakes though, i.e. wrong tense of words, missing words, missing letters, too many letters.

purpledot2: I think the story line is great. The writer does make some errors in the writing but she explained that. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

cazfarrington1: A thoroughly enjoyable read. I connected with the characters and the plot from the first word to the last. I am curious about Vance's story and wonder if this will emerge in future books.Thanks to the author for giving me hours of reading pleasure.

Devashree Acharya: Really good story. Kept me on my toes till the very end. Looking forward to reading the next one- Wanting the Doctor- very soon!! Keep up the good work.

Khushi: Nice book.Characters have a new twist.A bit of a cliché.But will go. 🎉🎉

ALLnThEyzzz: I couldn’t stop reading it. Can’t wait to read more of your stories

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Samantha: This book is amazing though I would have been happier if it wasn't so short and get more drama from Luke n his twin. Also see how their blend over as years go by with more fiction. It a very NYC mafia short story that lives u with a lot of unanswered questions.

LoveVixxen: Red is so intense and suffocating sometimes. I don't think I could be as patient as Julia. Very good story with unexpected twists. An enjoyable read for sure!

Jason Huskey: This book brings some amazing twists into the series that really help the series grow. Love the characters and how they continue to develop.

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