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The Hunted Predator

By Breeona Elliott All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Fantasy

Prologue


Immortality. Some would love to live forever. Others would do everything they could to end their endless life. It has its pros and cons. If you could live forever would you? Once your life is over that’s it. No do over’s. No resets. No extra chances. There are many myths on how one could live forever. Some say its magic or a curse. Some may think you would have to sell your soul to live forever. A lot of people, however, would rather be bit than to die. Get bitten by a vampire that is…..

I don’t care about what people think, but I am not a monster. Many people would call me such, but I promise you I never killed a human who didn’t deserve it. Come to think of it, I do believe the last one I killed had the intent to rape and kill a 14 year old girl. See? I’m not that bad, now am I? In 1991, I was born Jacob Ray Brown to Crystal Renee Brown and Jonathan James Brown. I just turned twenty-one years old when I was attacked and left in the street to die. It all started at my college graduation….

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SeanSavage: Good plot that moves fairly quickly. Time passage somewhat vague. but not indecipherable. Very good syntax, grammar and punctuation. The story flowed very well, however, the breaks between chapters and the time jumps tended to be slightly confusing at first. I could see where the author was going...

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