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Blessing In Disguise

By Marie King All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Thriller

Feelings

Intro.

I felt my blood rushing again I felt like I had ADHD I couldn’t keep still. I put my hand in my jacket pocket and my fingertips were touching my switchblade. Oh, how the cold metal blade felt nice. My pulse was speeding up, Sometimes I can control myself but sometimes I cannot. Today I was unable to control myself. I took my hand out of my pocket and took a deep breath.

Blood, Blood everywhere even on my new shoes damn it. But to be honest that didn’t matter to me at the moment. I was on cloud nine, the best day of my life!

Her screams. My laughter.

Terror in her eyes. My smile.

Her worst nightmare, My dream come true.

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