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Freed (Caged, #2)

By Onaiza All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Adventure

Blurb

Noor has fought her way towards a beautiful life in Canada with her husband. Guarding her superpower in a quiet and remote part of her heart. What happens when this beautiful and fulfilling life turns into a nightmare. This time her troubles are way more complicated than anything she's experienced before. It's not man this time that she has to fight. It's god or something like that. Daniel is dead and Noor has set off to get him back.

Prologue

I was preparing the Thanksgiving dinner and it was the most difficult ordeal I had yet faced in life. I had cooked before with the help of my mother and Alba but never alone. Tonight I was hoping to surprise Danny with his favorite onion soup and Schnitzel.

I used my superpower of finding out anything I want and looked through the best recipes in the world. That wasn't much trouble but carrying on the instructions was a different thing altogether. I had no special power to do that, so I had to rely on my human skills.

In a matter of minutes, I realized, I couldn’t even chop vegetables properly. They looked like a messy puddle.

But I went on, trying very hard to do as much as I could and when it was ready, I clicked a few pictures of the very first meal I had prepared all by myself.

I called Daniel to check on him but he didn’t pick up his phone. He must be busy or driving, I thought. I decided I'll use the time to straighten the kitchen. It was done quickly enough and Daniel still wasn’t there. I tried calling him again but with no better luck.

I grew pensive and trudged along the driveway when I saw his car closing in. Relief flooded through me and as soon as he was out of the car, I sprinted towards him to pull him into a hug.

“Where were you? I’ve been so worried,” I whispered and before he could answer I drove my lips towards his but he pulled away.

“Wait, don’t touch me. You’ll regret it,” he stated in a strangely firm and cold voice.

It didn’t sound like him but the voice wasn’t unfamiliar. I backed off slowly asking, “What are you talking about Daniel?”

“I’m not Daniel,” he murmured a little softly this time.

Assuming that this must be some kind of trick he’s playing at me, I chuckled, “Well, who are you then?”

“I’m Rhon,” he answered.

It was Rhon’s voice, I conceived. Not Rhon’s voice. But Rhon’s tone somehow in Daniel’s voice. But how and why was this? I couldn’t speak for a few seconds and nor did he.

“Where’s Daniel?” I muttered fearfully.

“I think he’s dead.”

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