strandedblue

London

Hello!! I’m an aspiring author who is working on too many books but loves doing it. I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I do.

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Creative and unique Android book!

First I want to give kudos to the author for giving the androids some character and flare of their own!

Jessica Holmes is a young scientist who wants to get accepted into her dream university for the robot program and still has hopes despite being rejected several times. She is hard head and at times cold when it comes to chasing her dreams. And she finally catches the eyes of the university when she makes a deal with three androids that she finds in the woods after venturing into the woods late at night for some moon sighting. Her fate is sealed and so is her acceptance when she is welcomed into the robot program.

The plot is very intriguing and the author really uses her characters well to make the story move in an interesting path. There are some humorous moments between Jessica and the androids that make it even more pulling when the gritty side comes into the picture.

The only criticism I have is that the author sometimes leans towards telling more than showing and that can take away from the story to reach its great potential. And the grammar needs a bit of work and it will be perfect!

There are only eight chapters up but I can already tell It's a great story in the making so keep writing!

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A promising dark mafia book

First of all, I love Gustavo, we all love his (sort) of empathy for Juliet!

And I must say that Juliet is a rare female character that I haven't come across in Mafia books, she has a dark side to her that I hope to see evolve as has taken steps towards taking her life back. She is smart and I think is very compatible with Giovanni. But what I like the most about Juliet is that she surprised me by not running back straight into Damien/Christian's arms and being harsh but truthful with her words even if she has missed him. Damien is a conflicted character and the author has really done well by showing that and earning sympathy from us as readers and Jules, even though his reasonings can't change the fact that Juliet went through so much pain and hurt because of him. The writing style was also very fitting for the story, fast-paced, and painted the scenes well.

The only criticism I have is that the first three chapters had a lot of info dumping about the Mafia families and hierarchy/history that could have been spread out throughout the book, perhaps through the characters having conversations instead of Juliet's thoughts. On the other hand, the author did very well when it came to Juliet's family tragedy and mentioned pieces throughout these chapters, which was very intriguing.

I think the plot is good and stands out because Juliet has worked for the mafia in the worst way possible and now since she killed Sergio I'm wondering how it will end for her! And who she will end up with...

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Good read!

A strong vampire woman clan leader? Sign me up! Plus a sweet alpha who deserves so much more? Man, Gen really messed up with that one. I enjoyed the book so far and the plot is intriguing as we want to know more about Rose’s fertility as a born vampire. I would love to see more world-building as I enjoyed the political input in this book.

I don’t have much criticism since there are only nine chapters up and so far the book is taking an interesting turn as I want to how the MCs will overcome their obstacles and how her clan will react to her being fertile! A very suspenseful book!

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One letter one number till the next meet

I will start of with that I love how their relationship was not toxic, something that I see in books with same plot. But a couple of things I stumbled over was the structure and language, otherwise this book was interesting!

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Angelique is me, I love K-dramas, and Gab and L

Angelique is me, I love K-dramas, and Gab and Leo as partners is really going to shake the table. This book is aboulstly great and I truly enjoyed it, I’m waiting for the next chapters!!

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Stuck With You

Hello! Thank you for taking some time to read my work, hopefully you will enjoy this road as much as I.

I will update weekly so tune in!

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