Sue_K

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What a story!

I believe that the sentence “A few nails and painting, my ass! I need an exorcist!” was one of the best pieces of dialogue I ever read. I simply loved the beginning of this story. The premise is mind-blowing. I couldn’t wait to learn about the demons – what they’re going to be like, whether they’ll have human qualities and which ones...
The world-building is extraordinary. So much so, that I could feel the joy of discovering the beauty of an old house with the main character. I liked the relationship progress of the main couple very much. It wasn’t forced, I could understand why they’re drawn together, it is beautifully done.
What seemed a little off to me were a few moments that I was struggling to comprehend. For example, when the main character announced that there were demons in her house to the whole community or when the big villain transformed into a good guy, then into a bad angel and a good angel. Those were great plot twists, for sure, but if more elaborated, it would be easier for the reader to follow them.

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The Feud

I don’t even know where to start. To be honest, after reading the synopsis, I wasn’t that thrilled to dive into this story because of my personal preferences, but the author hooked me before the first chapter was over. I loved the way the story interweaved the high school drama and Shakespeare’s classical masterpiece.
I’m not gonna lie, there were moments when I thought that maybe I didn’t need to know all the details I read and I was starting to be distracted, but the author always pulled me right back into the story with his incredibly distinctive voice and remarks like hating someone with every semipermeable membrane in their being. And the dialogue with a marinade parable? Brilliant.

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Wardens of the worthy

I enjoyed reading this story very much and can’t wait to find out what happens next. I liked that even as there were many supernatural elements, the characters felt very real. The wolf is written just brilliantly- it is incredible that she is as strong of a character as the rest of them and that she has both animal and human qualities. The next thing I need to mention is the relationship between two main characters. It is beautifully built up, funny, sweet, their chemistry is amazing. One thing that I would recommend to reconsider would be to give Eric a better introduction. There was a moment when I didn’t understand why they would care about him, as he was a stranger. Overall – it’s a great book!

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