Suly Gómez

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Grrr

Aghhh I truly dislike Byron what a jerk, but they weren’t playing it safe and it was bound to happen sooner or later. Now my stomach is in knots not knowing what’s going to happen.

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👍 great

Loving the story sooo far and can’t wait to continue reading!!

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❤️ love

Great story line and easy to follow!!

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Love it!!

Easy to read and extremely well written!!!

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Ehhh

Honestly I’m okay with the story but I definitely don’t like the fact that you feel you can charge for the rest of it. The grammar is all over the place and I’m often having to reread a sentence to have it make sense. You repeat yourself so much I skip portions at a time. I do think you have a good story line but I’m a strong believer in crawling before you can walk. Unfortunately this is where it ends for me, I wish you well in you writing career but also to humble yourself a bit and build a following.

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Easy breezy read!!!

It was easy to read and follow. Thank you I really enjoyed it. I also loved your cute notes on the intimate scenes, especially since they weren’t extremely graphic but that’s definitely what made it pleasing.

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