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I need more and I am loving it

Your writing style is awesome and descriptive it shows every scene with emotion. The book made me cry and laugh. Hoping to see more of them with Cameron, it was very sweet. Can’t wait to see Cameron's reaction when she knows that Genesis is her father too.

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Check it out.

This is a must read!

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Can be better!

I love the plot and your technical writing skills are good but I don't see much emotion in the text. I think it should be slightly more detailed. I am not trying to be mean, I am just putting my view forward.
I do love the plot it is unique it was well thought out, hope to see a bit more.

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I don't have words

It has been a few hours since I finished the book, the first few hours after reading I thoroughly regretted it. I was crying my eyes out; I was so sad. After the sadness decreased, I still couldn't help but love the book. This is one of the books I will remember forever, and it is in the pile with 'shadowhunters' and 'the fault in our stars'.
Truly worth reading, yes it makes you sad while reading the story and even after but, this book honestly told me that not everybody gets their happily ever after and that pain is there in everyone's lives.
Thank you for writing such an amazing book, even though I am still crying remembering the ending.

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COULDN'T STOP READING

Unique and unusual, words can't describe this story; everybody read this story; it is fantastic. One of the best stories I have ever read, writing does have a few mistakes but what is a book without a few mistakes, but the writing style is genuinely capturing...

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Loved it but was hoping for more.

Love your story, but I was so sad it ended abruptly without the epilogue. The character was sweet yet protective was hoping to see some extended scenes with the three of them together. And are Leila and Rafe mates?

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An interesting start.

A very catching start, the emotion and pain shown are drawing me and forcing me to continue reading. The blurb made me wonder how the story will go and I think that it is the thing that will make me continue to read it. Although there are a few mistakes here and there, the story and plot are capturing.

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Another forever

Reading the story made me happy and sad at the same time, I cried when Cade died but when they honoured Cade my heart grew with joy.

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The best friend's contract

The friendship before their marriage showed a good foundation and like people say your spouse is your best friend too. The fact that they would do anything for each other shows me what love should be, even if it is for family or friends. I have fallen in love with the story and I know that it is always going to be on my list.

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The cruel blind Alpha

Loved your storyline and showed that people can love even the cruellest of people. Loved each character and how you portrayed them, I believe even though it was extremely sad that he didn’t die like he was deserved, he is still going to suffer and live with the fact that he did all this by himself and nobody forced him to.
I am happy that you are writing a sequel to the book as it felt like there should be more, that he should suffer more. I truly cried throughout the whole book seeing how he treated her, his mate, his soulmate. The one he should have protected and loved died because of his cruelty.

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