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Nice!

OMG OMG OMG! You have so many interesting plot twists! It's so good! I honestly have no feedback besides going back and checking some grammar stuff. Good job! I'll be waiting for the next update! ;)

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Well...

Um so I cried... But I see why you did that plot twist. Although it hurts, it was a really cool book. Good job!

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Awesome

Omg this was amazing! Literally no words for this! Good job!

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Amazing 😁

Characters were kind of confusing to keep track of... Some grammar stuff needs to be fixed. Loved your plotline!

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