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The Beast

How it should've ended could never be as 1. The mate bond is unbroken unless a mate dies.She is very much alive so if he mark Olivia that would be all it was just a mark. It wouldn't have that mate bonding that he and Angel have as it's unbroken . Death is the only way to break it. 2. She is Beast, trained to endure total pain. As she no longer trusts him and she was told what he was going to do she wouldn''t kill herself as way of revenge.Especially with a child. She would however kill her would be successor. Besides killing herself would break the bond leaving him to truely mate with another. 3. While the human part of Leo might want to try and replicate what he lost the wolf part Demon who was staying quietly in the background would probably not allow it at the time. As animals are more basic and true than humans. Just my thoughts anyway.

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One and the same

Had me enthralled to the end. In the Victorian mansion , a bit more elaboration between the character Amy and Cari. The way the responses were written were slightly underwhelming. Apart from that it held me to the end.
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