Susan Richard Wentworth

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Interesting start, and it still needs more color. How about, when it begins, a flash back of why he's there. Maybe, when he's cutting his hair, a flash back. The first few paragraphs do draw the reader in. But, yes, I know its the starting point, it seems as if a epic flash back will draw them in tighter and want more. good start, though.

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