"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

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Nice work!

Great job, author! Your story gives the characters much depth, which is absolutely amazing. All the emotions the characters are feeling are clearly expressed. Although it's only three chapters in, I'd say the story is well-paced. One suggestion I have is to rewrite the summary of the story to be more eye-catching and hooking for passing readers. After all, a good story like this deserves more readers. Another suggestion is to describe Helen maybe. I'd love to know how she looks like. I enjoyed reading it!

Keep up the good work, author!

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