JP M

Keep on writing.

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar & Punctuation

Detailed, honest and engaging

I really enjoy how detailed and honest the story is. The characters are engaging too. There are times when the details are too mundane but then an interesting detail that moves the story forward comes along to keep me engaged. My favorite aspect is the way the narrator commentates and describes their thoughts on the world and their feelings. There were a few typos. Also there were times when the verb tense was inconsistent. Sometimes it would be in present and then it would switch to past tense.

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