NotMentallyOnEarth

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Warning, extra panties will be needed

Warning to readers, please ensure that additional panties are on hand before reading and do not read this book in public locations.

A explosion of steamy hotness, This is a must read book for anyone looking for a stimulating read and I'm not just talking about mental simulation either. Hint hint.

Oh yeah the plots good too, but damn baby. fires stoked up to high heat with this one.

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Hot and steamy read

Review as per my review on Amazon Au.
This is the kind of book that grips your attention in bestial claws from the moment you open to the first page.
It's a dark beast full of hardship and other 'hard' things -wink- but he keeps you close and doesn't let go, this book has made you his, and you will always belong to him. Even when you finish reading, he will still be there. Invading your mind and dreams, the book will never let you go. You are his, and you'd best remember that. So open to page one and allow him to draw you into his heated embrace.

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A decent read.

I found this book to be a decent read. The story flowed a little choppy to start but seem to improve somewhat as the chapters continued. I would advise the writer to try using a narrative program to listen to their book as that will help them with the sentencing and flow. (Some good free ones are available but I use Amazon polly as it's very realistic and doesn't have the pronunciation issues of free ones.)

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Promising start

Reading this at only 4 chapters in, I can say that this story has promise. It's a good start to what looks to be a great read, I'm interested in finding out where this will go in the future.

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Attention grabbing

This story grabs your attention from the start. The plot is great so far and the pacing is good. I can't wait to read more.

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An enjoyable read

This is an enjoyable read, the plot is well done and the story moves at a good pace. The characters have a great depth to their characteristics. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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Didn't put my phone down for a second

I very much enjoyed reading this story. I didn't put my phone down once. The story flowed very well and the plot draws you in. The world building was very well done, it made you feel like apart of the books world. It takes a great writer to achieve that.

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Love

Nooooo! Don’t give in!!!

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Love lots

Wow just wow I didn’t see that one coming

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