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Montana

Just a teenage girl pursuing her passions.

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Alphas maid

This book is soooooo good a few spelling errors but I loved it still reading

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Good job!

The ending was a bit confusing but overall good book!

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Torn between alphas

It's just kinda weird how she acts around. He guy friends I think shes a little to friendly with all them and even after clayton tells her how it makes him feel she continues to act the way she does

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Forevermore

I really like this story and it seems really interesting, I like that you are taking your time to go through the details of the story and set it up for readers so that we understand more about her life and her story.

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The Devils First Love

I like the story it just is a little weird, I might try to focus a little more on the details and slow the story down a little so that it makes more sense to readers. I don't think you should give up on the story though, just maybe go back and revisit for the little details, this story definetly has the promise and is already interesting, and funny.

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Inside out

Love your use of words and vocabulary!

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Alpha's Boy

Hi, always willing to write a review for a fellow author. Plot of the story is great and the pace is great as well. A few spelling\grammar mistakes but nothing that a view revistiations won't fix, keep it up!

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