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ruby geek and sysadmin. world record holder. ordained minister. food supervillian. esrb rated AO. perpetually full of rage.

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An excellent follow-up to Just Juliet

This was just what I wanted it to be. I greatly enjoyed Just Juliet last year, and when I noticed Charlotte was writing a follow-up from Lakyn's POV, I was excited. I liked this just as much as Just Juliet. It was interesting to see the characters shown in a state that was different, and satisfying to watch them change and grow into what I knew they'd become. I'm super pleased about this whole story.

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A delightful read

This was quite delightful. I have no idea why I pocket'd this, but man I'm glad I did. This strongly reminded me of Life Is Strange, although obviously without the weird time-changing abilities, and that's a great thing. I deeply enjoyed the narrative in that game, as I did in this story.

It feels real without being tedious, and heart-warming without being sappy. It's not all roses, and it's not all doom and gloom. It's great.

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