Ash Tenebris

🌿Aspiring Author & Cover Designer🌿Fiction-Thriller Writer🌿ashtenebris@gmail.com🌿

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Love it!

So far, so good! For a book in the beginning stages, The New Keeper is going great. With a fast paced and intriguing plot, I can’t wait to see where this story goes.

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Love it!

With an intriguing plot and unique characters, the dark tale of Raven is a wonderful read. Though grammatical edits could be made, this story itself is a well-written beauty.

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Touching

The poems, to those who can understand their meaning, are touching. Each poem, no matter the length, tells another story that yearns to be read, to be understood. All I can say to the writer, is simply thank you. Thank you for writing and having the courage to share this.

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Such A Creative Story!

It’s hard to find a story that doesn’t hit every clichè— especially ones like this. But this story is quite an unique one, which makes me love it all the more.

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Truly Beautiful

The poems, the writing style, the everything is just beautiful. Every story is alluring, drawing closer those who read it. Each story breathes light into such dark words.

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Unlike Anything I’ve Read

The Second Coming is unlike anything I’ve ever read, which is a great thing. The author has an unique writing style, and tells the story in a wonderful way. Though I don’t usually read religion-based stories, the Second Coming has me wanting to read more.

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Wonderful!

Though I don’t usually enjoy poetry books, I did enjoy what I read of this one. That being said, I’ll defintely finish this. Like every book, there was minor technical mistakes, but the poems themselves were wonderful.

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Good Start

More than anything, this story has an unique plot. The vampire-ape empidemic is something I’ve never heard a story cover, so it’s nice to have something new. There are a few techinical and description issues, but nothing a little bit of editing can’t fix.
To the author, if you have any questions about the review or editing, feel free to ask.

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Good work

Pretty good, could use a little more detail.

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Needs Some Work

Though the plot itself has me intrigued, it does need some work. There isn’t much emotion shown within the story, which could really help connect the reader with the character(s) and the situations. Regarding the technical things, just a little bit of editing could help a lot. Changing things like r to are, u to you and ur to your/you’re easily makes a story sound and look better.

To the author, if you need help editing or with anything, feel free to ask me, I’d love to help out.

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Very Good

Spell Me Once has a well developed plot and characters, with an opening that isn’t too slow; like most books are. The dialogue and actions are wonderful, too. However, the pace can be too fast at points. Also, there are some points in descriptions that change from first to third person. It sounds a little out of place, but not enough to throw off the reader.

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Love It!

The beginning is beautiful, and chapter one’s ending only making it more intriguing. The story is introduced wonderfully. Quick editing could be done to perfect it, but there isn’t much that needs changed. Can’t wait to read more!

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Different in a Good Way

Much different from what I normally read, but nonetheless, I’ve enjoyed it so far. There’s a well introduced plot and characters as well as a bit of uniqueness in writing style. Of course, editing could be done to perfect it all, but overall Metallic Love is a well-written book.

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Wonderful

Hollow’s Charge is wonderfully written and intriguing story. With characters all unique from one another and a well thought plot, the story is much less cliché than others of the same genre. Very well done.
As a critique’s point of view, minor grammar edits can be done, but there is nothing major to be changed. Some of the pacing is slower than other parts, but again, there is no major pace issues.
Again, very well done.

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Needs A Few Edits

This story is in need of edits. I understand when writing happens, it just happens, with no care of grammar, realism, punctuation, spelling, etc. but going back through and editing helps a story flow better. The idea of this story is also very cliché, and though that may change as it goes on, the start of your average teen being bullied isn’t exactly unique. If you need help editing and/or simply changing some things, you can just ask me and I’ll be happy to help.

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Beautiful

The writing style flows well, the poems both simple and complex. It’s a beautiful read. The poems are deep, even if they don’t apply to everyone. There’s some grammar mistakes in the intro, fewer in the poems themselves. And that’s really it. Good work.

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I Love It!

The story itself is wonderful, far more unique than so many others in this genre. The writing style has a very storytelling feel, which only makes it all the better. I did notice a couple of minor technical mistakes, but nothing too major.

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Truly Wonderful

These poems are all beautifully written with such simple elegance, and though they’re simplistic, they run deep. The poems in this collection, these confession of so many things, are all so touching.

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Quite Intriguing

Though it’s not something I’d normally read,
I find Triple Date quite intriguing. The contradictions between Chess and Cora are clear from the beginning and are rather entertaining.

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Interesting

I wouldn’t normally read books like this, but Demon Dusted is truly intriguing. The characters are interesting, and because they spilled thier secrets so easily, it makes me wonder what else they hide.

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