Ash Tenebris

Absolutely Wonderful

The world building in this story is great, it allows for vivid imagery and sets the tone of the rest of the story. It’s a great beginning and I’m very pleased to have found this book. However, as with every story, there are flaws. In places, it can be overly detailed. Some things are left best untold or at the very least held off on. Many of the words and descriptions are repetitive, which can be somewhat annoying to read. Nonetheless, with just a little bit of editing here and there, soon this story will be flawless.

A Great Start

It’s a storyline that’s been covered much before— main character must save nature from industrial workers who are polluting it. However, this story introduces it in a new way. With Ana’s supernatural ability, it adds a sort of twist. There is a lot of potiental with the plot and subplots, not to mention the characters.

As a side note, there’s a few techinical errors, but nothing a little editing won’t fix. Some pacing and detailing could be altered, no major issues though. Nontheless, I’m intrigued to find out what happens next.

Love it!

So far, so good! For a book in the beginning stages, The New Keeper is going great. With a fast paced and intriguing plot, I can’t wait to see where this story goes.

Love it!

With an intriguing plot and unique characters, the dark tale of Raven is a wonderful read. Though grammatical edits could be made, this story itself is a well-written beauty.

Touching

The poems, to those who can understand their meaning, are touching. Each poem, no matter the length, tells another story that yearns to be read, to be understood. All I can say to the writer, is simply thank you. Thank you for writing and having the courage to share this.

Truly Beautiful

The poems, the writing style, the everything is just beautiful. Every story is alluring, drawing closer those who read it. Each story breathes light into such dark words.

Unlike Anything I’ve Read

The Second Coming is unlike anything I’ve ever read, which is a great thing. The author has an unique writing style, and tells the story in a wonderful way. Though I don’t usually read religion-based stories, the Second Coming has me wanting to read more.

Wonderful!

Though I don’t usually enjoy poetry books, I did enjoy what I read of this one. That being said, I’ll defintely finish this. Like every book, there was minor technical mistakes, but the poems themselves were wonderful.

Interesting

Though this typically isn’t the genre I find myself reading, it did have quite the hook that not many stories alike to this have. The characters and plot seem well developed, something that is greatly important to a story. However, there were errors in sentence structure and grammar, but nothing that couldn’t be fixed with a round or two of editing. Some of the descriptions feel out of place; it’s best to hold back details sometimes— not all of them are needed. Overall, a great start.

Good Start

More than anything, this story has an unique plot. The vampire-ape empidemic is something I’ve never heard a story cover, so it’s nice to have something new. There are a few techinical and description issues, but nothing a little bit of editing can’t fix.
To the author, if you have any questions about the review or editing, feel free to ask.

Good work

Pretty good, could use a little more detail.

Needs Some Work

Though the plot itself has me intrigued, it does need some work. There isn’t much emotion shown within the story, which could really help connect the reader with the character(s) and the situations. Regarding the technical things, just a little bit of editing could help a lot. Changing things like r to are, u to you and ur to your/you’re easily makes a story sound and look better.

To the author, if you need help editing or with anything, feel free to ask me, I’d love to help out.

Different in a Good Way

Much different from what I normally read, but nonetheless, I’ve enjoyed it so far. There’s a well introduced plot and characters as well as a bit of uniqueness in writing style. Of course, editing could be done to perfect it all, but overall Metallic Love is a well-written book.

Needs A Few Edits

This story is in need of edits. I understand when writing happens, it just happens, with no care of grammar, realism, punctuation, spelling, etc. but going back through and editing helps a story flow better. The idea of this story is also very cliché, and though that may change as it goes on, the start of your average teen being bullied isn’t exactly unique. If you need help editing and/or simply changing some things, you can just ask me and I’ll be happy to help.

I Love It!

The story itself is wonderful, far more unique than so many others in this genre. The writing style has a very storytelling feel, which only makes it all the better. I did notice a couple of minor technical mistakes, but nothing too major.

Truly Wonderful

These poems are all beautifully written with such simple elegance, and though they’re simplistic, they run deep. The poems in this collection, these confession of so many things, are all so touching.

Quite Intriguing

Though it’s not something I’d normally read,
I find Triple Date quite intriguing. The contradictions between Chess and Cora are clear from the beginning and are rather entertaining.