Teodora

Serbia

I'm 22 y.o & I'm just here to share my imagination with other people!

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So exciting!(I'm not really good at these review titles btw)

The story is really fun and interesting. Honestly I haven't read a lot of dystopian books with cyberpunk elements but this one gives the genre a really good name! The descriptions, the writing styles, the characters are all very well-written and I can't really give any criticism regarding that. So, keep up the good work! I absolutely love AIs so it was really fun to read about them as they are described really well in this story. Everything that is described in the story can be imagined really well, you have managed to give life to it which is also a good thing as well.
All in all, it was very enjoyable, excited for the new chapters~!

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Quite an interesting story!!

Overall, the plot and the idea behind is very creative and unique and I quite enjoyed getting to know the characters and the world in the book. The plot itself is very interesting and fun and it's obvious that the author enjoyed writing this.
However, at some points there is too much dialogue and too little descriptions of inner thoughts and emotions. Especially when it comes to parts where there's obvious inner struggle. I don't think characters themselves are bad, they are actually very well thought of and they do have a personality but like I said, it's more about writing style than anything else. Also there are times where happenings are just dropped on the reader all of a sudden without the "introduction" to them.
Fantasy is not an easy genre to write as it requires a lot of world building but the author does seem quite creative and they did a very good job with it overall. I think with a bit of fixing those little things, I do believe it could be an even more enjoyable read in the end!

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Full of intrigue!

The story is very intriguing and full of mystery from start to finish and honestly I can't wait for more updates! The descriptions and the characters in the story are very well written, it's very refreshing. The writing has quite a cozy style to it in my opinion making it a very enjoyable read. The plot is quite unique which makes it really stand out and leaves you wanting for more chapters!

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Pretty fun read!

The plot is super entertaining and it definitely makes you want to continue reading. The characters are well-written and the interactions between them are pretty fun and interesting to read. I think the only issue is that there isn't much of character development and a lot of the story mainly focuses on dialogues. Not that it is wholly bad, I just feel like there could be more room for inner thoughts and external descriptions in general.
Overall, the story and the plot is good and has been well executed. Keep it up!

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Super exciting!

As the title says, this story was very exciting and fast-paced which made it very easy to read and keep the attention. It reminded me a bit if MHA(My Hero Academy) and The Boys had a baby! The fighting in the story is described very well and I quite enjoyed reading it as it was easy to picture what was going on. The story itself was very action-oriented which truly reminded me of superhero comics but just written down! It really is a type of a book I have not read before so it was quite fun reading it.
The grammar itself is good except for a few small mistakes but they're nothing to worry about.
Overall, it is obvious that the author had a fun writing this and in turn made the whole story fun to read. So if one is into a fast-paced, superhero and action-oriented story, then this is the one you'd want to read!
Honestly would love to see this one turned into a movie!

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