Ballarat, Australia

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Good beginning - Prologue

I really enjoyed starting the story with the pirate action and this is a great way to hook your reader. I was a little confused as to how the innocent ship was able to stay afloat when it was riddles with holes below sea level - maybe that could be clarified a bit? Sorry if I sound a bit teacher-ish (old habits), but I'm looking forwarded to reading the next few chapters. Keep going!

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