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Amazing

Overall this was amazing as I love this genre. I look for escape to another world and you certainly achieved that and created a fantastic world, good goodies and baddies and a captivating plot.
I am awaiting for the to be continued... to be continued.
I felt that the writing style really improved the further you went along, and although I loved everything maybe the first three chapters could be edited a little bit to make it like the rest of the story. There were a few grammatical mistakes but this is easily changed and I really think that over all it can be great because I thoroughly enjoyed the story in this amazing world you created. The dialogue was great and I could picture it as a movie with the clear style of writing. Keep going, because I want to know what happens :)

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Captivating and powerful

I was hooked at the blurb and was enthralled all the way to the end. I really appreciated the dark tones and lovely touches throughout while addressing an important issue. I thought the capturing of Thatcher’s Britain was brilliantly written, being born in the 90s I felt I was there due to the accuracy and lovely style of writing. I really enjoyed reading it, definitely my cup of tea.

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Enthralling read

All aspects of this story a great. The timing, the style in particular and the dark, gripping plot. It’s the sort of story that you can’t put down until you’ve read right through the end it’s so captivating. Most of all it’s beautifully written with amazing emotion in the narrative. I think the ending is fab, as it gives a bit of a ‘will there or won’t there be a follow up?’ Which would be great. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it as it’s my favourite genre to read. Amazing work!

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Gripping throughout

Overall this has been the most enjoyable and gripping read on Inkitt so far.
The blurb had me gripped immediately and pretty much all the way through I was on the edge of my seat and wanted to know what's going to happen next. Its a dark subject but a great mystery with lots of suspense with great characters.
The style is brilliant, everything flowed smoothly and I loved the feeling created by the style, I could picture it a s a film or a mystery/crime series and would honestly love a follow up with Blake and Sara. I think the style improved and improved as the story developed and once all the characters main were introduced.
I was really impressed with the grammar and punctuation and couldn't see any fault there.
Over all: really really good. I want to see it on netflix!

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Immediately hooked

Just from the introduction and prologue so far this is already a very interesting and compelling story line. The style of writing is very good, charming and it flows and fitting for this genre (which is my favourite!). I am really looking forward to see how the plot develops as the story is already very intriguing.

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Beautifully written

The first two chapters so far are very intriguing and kept me interested with each sentence. The dialogue and character's thoughts are written in a very charming style. Its really descriptive and I felt as though I was walking along side James. And the cover is spookily beautiful, had me hoked straight away.

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Captured so well

This was really well captured in a dark, chilling manner and I wanted to carry on reading sat at the edge of my seat. The length is perfect for a commute read. There were a few minor grammatical issues but over all really really good and love how it’s written.

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Great read

This is a great depiction of perhaps the most fascinating love stories in Greek mythology. Really enjoyed the style that flowed throughout and kept me wanting to read until the end.

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On the edge of my seat

This is a great piece of writing, I found myself wanting to know what happens next with each sentence. Great read. definitely up my street. Nice and dark.

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