The_Daydreamer

Following my dream job (writer) because no one let me be one.

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Best story

Loved it. I can't stop reading it. It was addictive as hell. Can't stop reading before completing 😍❤

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Amazing

Its an amazing book.I loved it. Plz author update more frequently I am dying to know what happens next.

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Worth reading

Your writing style and vocabulary is good. I really like your writing style but there are some things I would like to point out:
1. I don't know which place or time are the characters in. Although you depicted there condition very accurately but still I don't know where they live. How I should imagine there house or other things.
2. I have noticed that in 3rd and 4th chapter, paragraphs are too long. Nobody likes it. It feels like skipping them and then the reader might skip some important part.
Other than that everything is beautiful. I love the story💜

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