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Bittersweet with a sprinkle of goodness!

The story gave a new perception what mercy is supposed to be! It would have to do, the explanation that our guardian angels became our angel of death, because in a world of so much chaos, a book just like this would make you think to be a guardian to the people you love. This is the kind of book I wouldn't mind rereading. Love and Life has always been the most powerful driving force in the universe, but so is Karma. The switching point of view between characters is flawless. And how the author told their bittersweet tale was refreshing, because I, the reader, knows that their time shall come. And that knowledge keeps my heart from breaking for them.

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Tolerable.

This story lacks so many elements. The story's climax was okay but then it lead to an abrupt ending. Plot holes and character development issues are apparent. As a reader who has read countless of stories, I think this book needs major editing.

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