The Markerpen

Colombo

Hi I'm The Markerpen. I'm still learning how to write and I would be glad if you could give constructive criticism for my work.

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Recommend!!

I didn't think I would love this kind of story but I was wrong. More than thing I loved the writing style. The way it introduced cannibalism very matter of factly was creepier than any horror story I have read. GOOOD LUCKKK

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LOVE THIS

This is soo good! The writing style is so effortless and genius. Can't wat for more! I really have nothing to criticize. I just want to keep reading. GOOD LUCK!!! .PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!

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GREAT!!

The plot is amazing!! It keeps you hooked on to the story. The emotions are displayed so well! There was a bit of typos and it made it bit harder for me to stay in the story but all that could corrected with a single edit. The writing style is great! I think it plays a bigger part in keeping the reader hooked on to the story. GOOOD LUCKKK!! Can't wait to see the end!

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Very interesting!!!

I love the writing style!! The story seems very interesting but I can't seem to form an idea about where it's going. I think I need to read more chapters form a complete opinion about the plot. So far it's interesting. Not too much actions to make your head hurt but enough action to keep on reading it. GOOD LUCK!!

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Loved it!!

I really don't read poetry at all but this one has me hooked!! The language is simple and easy to understand but there's such deep meaning behind it. Even the outlook of life in this is similar to my own so I enjoyed it. Keep on writing. GOOD LUCK!!

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